Poem - 03 February 2024, 10:18 Haiku K.G. Munro tadpoles dance around moonflowers but only one can pollinate it Like 6 Pin it 2 Support CosmoFunnel.com You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal. Views: 569 Rating: Total votes: 6 Tags: Flowers Haiku Life Metaphorical Symbolism Poetry Genre: Haiku Topic: Nature 21 comments
sparrowsong03 February 2024, 11:13 Hello K.G. I... What number am I? I that number that... Great Haiku Thank you for sharing... sparrowsong Reply
K.G. Munro03 February 2024, 11:32 Hey Sparrow, Thank you kindly, I just felt like doing a haiku that was one big metaphor for life <3 Much love, K.G. Reply
John Loopstra11 February 2024, 05:22 I love writing haiku's, but sadly am too often unsuccessful unless my wife write a few lines and wants me too haikufy them. Happened yesterday fir the 2nd time, will be coming on soon Reply
K.G. Munro11 February 2024, 05:24 That's wonderful :) writing any kind of haiku whether it is traditional, contemporary, or hybrid takes time to perfect but it's worth the effort <3 Reply
John Loopstra11 February 2024, 05:27 Totally agree, it is the 5-7-5 discipline and the idea of a philosophical comment on the world/life that eludes the anarchist in me🤣 Reply
K.G. Munro11 February 2024, 05:43 ah, well I hope this helps <3 Example: s'mores at pebble beach - ( 5 syls with pause/contrast/ cutting word in the form of a dash ) with an open fire and stars ( 7 syls/ bridge between the first and last part) floating in summer (5 syls with kigo aka seasonal word) Reply
John Loopstra11 February 2024, 05:53 I am happy here, Bonfire warming cold bones, Storm's raging across A lonely beach on The edge of silence by sea, All's quiet in me See, I can even do double haiku's 🤣📝 Actuakly, this is a keeper, look for it at dawn some day (usually post a piece before leaving for work🤔😁 Reply
John Loopstra11 February 2024, 05:56 Hanx, for the sea image it helps i am taking my weekly Sunday bath🛀 Reply
K.G. Munro11 February 2024, 06:03 Welcome, the key to a good piece of writing is organic inspiration. Reply
The fish of the sea11 February 2024, 17:03 Damn K.G sorry I'm late for this one. You have a way with words... it bleeds through your art. Enjoyed a hell of a lot~ Reply
K.G. Munro12 February 2024, 07:31 Hey there, It is perfectly fine, life can get crazy <3 Thank you, I do my best, I am happy you enjoyed it Reply
Yiyan Han07 May 2024, 08:53 Just wonder, K.G, if moonflower rather than moonflowers makes a perfect sense with some alteration ;) Yiyan Reply
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Indeed!
Thank you :) life is such a wonderful thing
It really, really is!
Hello K.G.
I...
What number am I?
I that number that...
Great Haiku
Thank you for sharing...
sparrowsong
Hey Sparrow,
Thank you kindly, I just felt like doing a haiku that was one big metaphor for life <3
Much love,
K.G.
Have you started flying yet?
Are you on break?
What do you mean?
but we all want to try .. write :)
hah right, but yeah I like experimenting with haikus.
Me too :)
I love writing haiku's, but sadly am too often unsuccessful unless my wife write a few lines and wants me too haikufy them. Happened yesterday fir the 2nd time, will be coming on soon
That's wonderful :) writing any kind of haiku whether it is traditional, contemporary, or hybrid takes time to perfect but it's worth the effort <3
Totally agree, it is the 5-7-5 discipline and the idea of a philosophical comment on the world/life that eludes the anarchist in me🤣
ah, well I hope this helps <3
Example:
s'mores at pebble beach - ( 5 syls with pause/contrast/ cutting word in the form of a dash )
with an open fire and stars ( 7 syls/ bridge between the first and last part)
floating in summer (5 syls with kigo aka seasonal word)
I am happy here,
Bonfire warming cold bones,
Storm's raging across
A lonely beach on
The edge of silence by sea,
All's quiet in me
See, I can even do double haiku's 🤣📝
Actuakly, this is a keeper, look for it at dawn some day (usually post a piece before leaving for work🤔😁
Haitwo's haha, great job :)
Hanx, for the sea image it helps i am taking my weekly Sunday bath🛀
Welcome, the key to a good piece of writing is organic inspiration.
Damn K.G sorry I'm late for this one. You have a way with words... it bleeds through your art. Enjoyed a hell of a lot~
Hey there,
It is perfectly fine, life can get crazy <3
Thank you, I do my best,
I am happy you enjoyed it
Just wonder, K.G, if moonflower rather than moonflowers makes a perfect sense with some alteration ;)
Yiyan