Poem -
Pink Kiss
Part 1
kissing hot lips
ย ย ย glossy in hot pink
ย ย ย ย ย ย taste like strawberries
ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย scented like sweet roses
ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย feeling each breath
ย ย ย ย ย ย as each lips touch
ย ย ย ย warm and succulent
under the moon
15-07-2021
Pratibha Savaniย
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Love this P!ย Its fabulous x
Hi Tina! Thank you it means alot comih from you. Especially this sort of write.ย
I thought I would post it on Cosmo too ๐
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You are doing really well on POP! Aswell as doing really well here. Good to see you in both places xย
Thank you Tina. I only recently started entering the contest in POP even though I joined it last year lol.ย
I miss cosmo it's the place I first posted online so I just need to find time to do both equally with my other commitments.ย
Glad to see you on pop as well. Chat soon my friend! Love you!ย Pxx
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Hello Pย
this is a very sensual write. A kiss that feels quenched by the moon. Quite majestic and very beautifulย
Gwen :) x โค๏ธ
Thank you Gwen. Its totally different to what I usually write about! But these lines just came out when I had a go at it lol. I am expanding my writing skills with this one. Thank you for reading. Always value your feedback. Pxxx
Hi Pratibha and just a little late joining here, but worth arriving and you had me on the word Kiss in the title.
Your poem delivers cupid's arrow and then some and who after reading, can truly say romance is dead.
A sensually delivered poem and beautifully well written my friend.
And full honours gratefully given and now to venture to part 2.
Thanks for sharing Pratibha and hope all is well for you and your family.
ย And simply enjoy life.x.
Hi Shaun apologies in the late reply. It's been a busy summer and I've not been on here much at all.
Thank you so much for your lovely feedback. I wrote this and had no idea or intention that there would be a part 2 or 3. You know sometimes when u write something effortlessly and dont even need to do any edits...well this was one of those amazing writes for me.ย
Will be catching up on what i can on here now.
hope you had a good summer.Chat soon. Px
Ahh, and I see this as the lightest of the three. Also, love the structure in all of them. Strange how something unconventional can sometimes be easier on the eyes and even more engaging. Bloody brillent. Enjoyed the series P
Hi Max! How are you?!! Thank you for reading my pink kiss series!ย
I think short poetry is the best.
I mean why do we want to waffle when we can say it in less words?!
Glad you liked it. It was an interesting challenge doing the last 2 parts. Definately challenged me as a writer/poet. Had to make it work in the short lines I wrote so effortlessly in part 1!! Lol. Great to hear from u.
hope uni is going well. Must chat soon. Drop me your email address...need to send u a link. Px
Wow...how did I miss these? Amazing X