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Pinnacle.............................................................................Dedicated to Ethan

Pinnacle.............................................................................Dedicated to Ethan

I see you wallowing down in the          pit,
Your freedom; trying your best to win!
I'll make an attempt with my finite wit,
To lift you out, you're not pulling me   in!

There's so many evils in the city!
To dIsTrAct you and ever drag you   down.
Must WANT TO leave the mire of self pity!
Even friends won't help; if YOU choose to drown.

That's the easy way; everything just a whim.
No, the other way won't allow you to            binge.
Satan wants you to be miserable just like him!
Yes, mountain!  a  one  step  at  a  time  challenge.

  A complete existence of honored self worth!
  A glorious pinnacle! higher than the earth!

                                                  

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sparrowsong

Hello Jim...

That's the trick...

Not getting sucked in...

Great write!

Thank you for sharing...

sparrowsong

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Shaun Cronick

Jim great poem for how right you are, in this life we all live and lead its all about determination and not to suffer fools gladly from all its hollow and crass temptations. Just snap out of it and man up.
Many thanks and take care.

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Jim "The Lad" ....

Thank you Shaun! there are exceptions, but the climate today prompted this write! Most of my more " uplifting" poems I posted back in December. Glad you liked it!

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Saffron Amber Hill

Very motivational, I love this. Thanks for sharing.
''Must WANT TO leave the mire of self pity!
Even friends won't help; if YOU choose to drown.'' - I will remember this and use it wisely.

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Jim "The Lad" ....

Thank you for reading and your comment Saffron! So glad it is useful!......Jim

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