Pinnacle.............................................................................Dedicated to Ethan
I see you wallowing down in the pit,
Your freedom; trying your best to win!
I'll make an attempt with my finite wit,
To lift you out, you're not pulling me in!
There's so many evils in the city!
To dIsTrAct you and ever drag you down.
Must WANT TO leave the mire of self pity!
Even friends won't help; if YOU choose to drown.
That's the easy way; everything just a whim.
No, the other way won't allow you to binge.
Satan wants you to be miserable just like him!
Yes, mountain! a one step at a time challenge.
A complete existence of honored self worth!
A glorious pinnacle! higher than the earth!
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Thank you Cherie for seeing the value of my write!
thank you Greg!
I thank you Hj for your continued support!
Hello Jim...
That's the trick...
Not getting sucked in...
Great write!
Thank you for sharing...
sparrowsong
Need your wings! thank you so much! sparrowsong!
Jim great poem for how right you are, in this life we all live and lead its all about determination and not to suffer fools gladly from all its hollow and crass temptations. Just snap out of it and man up.
Many thanks and take care.
Thank you Shaun! there are exceptions, but the climate today prompted this write! Most of my more " uplifting" poems I posted back in December. Glad you liked it!
Thank You John!
Very motivational, I love this. Thanks for sharing.
''Must WANT TO leave the mire of self pity!
Even friends won't help; if YOU choose to drown.'' - I will remember this and use it wisely.
Thank you for reading and your comment Saffron! So glad it is useful!......Jim
Great thought provoking write.
Humbled Liliana! thank you!