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Poetic Vision

Poetic Vision

Odes to individuality 

exquisite artistry

a diverse family

offering free therapy.

Seeing moments in phrases

colorful depictions

of rhythm & imagery,

limited only by one's mind.

No boundaries or borders

for unleashing imagination

relaying unbridled passion

awakening the spirit.

Sharing mental unrest

relieving real-time distress

pure freedom

and sweet release.

Evoking emotion,

capturing motion

unlimited opportunities

with unrestricted reins.

Exploring & inventing

penning picturesque escapes

endless discoveries...

this life of poetic vision.

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Tony Taylor

Hey Jackie...... love this my friend....... the line that sticks out to me the most was "Odes to individuality".... that stop and made me consider the beauty of being a member of the COSMO family....... Fistful-o-Stars!!...... love the beautiful flowing phrasing here!!........ well done my friend......:.LOVE and ROCKETS!!........T xo  ?✳✴☀

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Jacki Goebel

Thanks Tony!  There aren't enough words to describe the therapeutic release of writing & also enjoying others' works!  Sometimes I feel like there's an idea brewing & bouncing in my head but the words haven't yet formed...  Can you relate?  Thanks for the props!  Blessings!*!*!

Jacki

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Deborah Evans

Hi  Jacki Yes exactly what a poet feels i think
what he portrays on a page,  that which is written from deep in his soul 
it is a beautiful thing
individual experiences that are 

"offering free therapy.

Seeing moments in phrases

colorful depictions

of rhythm & imagery,"

Love this Jacki pinned 
Best wishes Debs 

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Jacki Goebel

Hi Debs!  Thank you SO much for the kind feedback...and for the pin!!  I think we poets see the world differently and the most "normal" thing can inspire a new poem. :)  It's a great release for me.  Blessings!*!*!

Jacki

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Leah Yodico

Hi Jacki,  a lovely piece to read!!

XOXO Leah 

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Jacki Goebel

Thanks, Lisa, appreciate it very much!*!*!  Poetry is so freeing and individuality can be so easily expressed. :)

Jacki

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Jacki Goebel

Thanks, Leah!  I think I've figured out we can't be nominated (at least right away) once we've been selected as a winner.  Keep smiling!*!*!

Jacki

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Julie Lucas

So true... great read thanks ? All the best Julie x

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Jacki Goebel

Thanks so much, Julie!  Poetry...such a rule-free means of expression!*!*!  Appreciate the feedback!

Jacki

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