Poem -
She is pretty ugly
She is ugly.
Look at her
A person will never say
She is pretty.
Because everyone thinks
She has no beauty,
No one will think
She is beautiful.
She is ugly.
No one thinks
Otherwise,
Unless we look at her from a different perspective.
(Now read from bottom to top)
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Everyone is beautiful, and beauty is not just about appearance. Shout out to everyone hurting, and feeling like you aren't worth it, because you are! <3
XXX, Addison
Yes! the Lord looks on the heart, while man tries to force change from the outside in, Some day our spiritual eyes will open and we will see truth and true beauty! Clever write!..................Jim
Thankyou! This poem has been in the works for a while, and I feel so strongly that people are degraded and judged on the wrong things. Beauty is not only about appearance.
What a fantastic write...love it! 😊
I'm glad you liked it! I'm new to this website, so this is all exciting!
"beauty is in the eye of the beholder" - this is true in every culture. Nice piece.
Thankyou! I definitely agree with you!
Simple true... Well expressed Addison... Welcome to cosmofunnel. Warm regards.
Thankyou! <3
That is so very clever how you managed that formate. I have tried in the past to do something similar but always got caught on the words. Impressive and immersive read. Kudos! TFOTS
Thanks! There's actually a pattern, and once you figure it out, it's easy to write that kind of poem. :)
That is super cool I really really like that and I think it would resonate with teenage girls very well
Yes. Many girls don't realize the beauty within them. And it's so sad because every girl/human is beautiful!
This is so cool! I love how you chose your words and where you put them so well and then having the reader reread it from bottom to top.
Thankyou! <3