Poem -

Pretty as a colourful bloom

Pretty as a colourful bloom

Delicate petals
So colourful
Shimmering in the sun
In the afternoon
What a beautiful
Glowing bloom
It reminds of you
In the way you look and move
Perfectly formed by nature
I wish to nurture you to greater
Yet I am not trying to over state you
And your amazing to me
When you fly free
Then I know just then
Your beauty is best when let go
So that it can breathe and grow
So your beautiful blooms can grow
Then you will dazzle the world
And everyone will know
Just how much I love you so
Then in all your nature I will see your essence flow.

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sarah harry

a soft and calming sensation oozing through it beautifully written :)

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Fauxcroft

Thank you very much for reading and appreciating my friend  Faux :) 

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Cherie Sumner-Taylor

Hi Fauxcroft...What a beautiful metaphor of beauty in one like a blooming flower...delicate and admired, and not wanting to stiffen her nature to just be who she is....Lovely sentiments. xo :0  I enjoyed much.   

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Fauxcroft

Thank you very much Cherie, I very much appreciate your kind words and wonderful critique. Faux 

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Fauxcroft

Thank you very much for reading you're too kind. Much appreciated. Faux 

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Barry Childs

This is so beautiful and so well crafted, Fauxy, and obviously about me.
Barry x

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