Poem -

PROHIBITION

PROHIBITION

Remember what happened before, just driven underground,
ironically, we have the right to damage health it's been found;
alcohol, sugar, nicotine, fatty foods all contribute to our death,
but should have the right to enjoy ourselves before our death.

But at what cost - health services are stretched, they will be,
by whatever comes along, humans are fallible with stupidity;
where did 'failure' start - the first bite from the tree of knowledge,
and the dismissal that this life of ours is an incredible privilege.

The concept that we will live forever dosn't really work,
like some achievable nirvana givinng all a fantastic perk;
the beautiful fruit created is now covered with fertiliser,
we should have known that our smartness is none the wiser.

We will all just be 'waved' away like some great cosmic hiccup,
Adam offered Eve a Balkan Sobranie, said - 'No thanks, I've given up.' 

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sparrowsong

Hello Terry...

There's a running joke here...

Many of us decided we're going to enjoy life while we can...

Every extremely healthy person still dies...

Matter of fact some are even known to have damaged themselves...

Now, they're on medication with chemicals to make things flow right...

Some that didn't do it in moderation...

Oh well, they seemed to have enjoyed themselves too...

The ones that are enjoying ourselves will continue until we no longer can...

​​​​​​Great fun write!

Thank you for sharing...

sparrowsong

 

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Terry Reeves

Hi Sparrow,
Poem prompted after UK has passed bill
to stop sale of cigarettes  to everyone born
after 2009! Glad I'm old!
Thanks so much,
love,
Terry.
xoxo :)

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Terry Reeves

Hi Greg,
Tis true - we're not 
always well red!
Love,
Terry.
xoxo :)

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Terry Reeves

Hi Marion,,
Thanks so much,
love,
Terry.
xoxo :)

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