Poem -
Psychotic
Something about you girl that look in those baby blue eye's got me in a trance.
I catch myself thinking of you girl my mind losing focus.
Girl you got me going psychotic for your love.
This girl's love has me in a psychosis state need a prescription for ambien to sleep.
Her love is erotic I'm going crazy in and out of a neurotic state.
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Comments
awesome ink, welcome to CosmoFunnel.Β
From your newest fan
Thanks and I can't wait to go read some of your own writings and nice to meet you.
I hope you enjoy. I have a darkness to writing.
A darker side why yes I will most definitely enjoy your writings....
Hey CANDRA!!....I Like the Bi-polar aspect of this ~ " I'm going crazy in and out of a neurotic state"...... I'm a songwriter by profession and this definitely has a lyrical resonanceΒ to it!!.......ALL STARS!!... well done..... and...... WELCOME to COSMO !!.......LOVE and ROCKETS!!.....T xo ?ββ΄
Hi Tony thank you for your words they really mean a lot and thanks for welcoming me to Cosmo ????
Fantastically sad and beautiful! I love your writings!
Thank you so very much your opinion means a lot to me
Good poem it also has a lyrical quality!
Your thoughts have a deep meaning to me and I thank you so much ?