Poem -
Pull Out
Pull out, Pull outÂ
Lives could be taken
Pull out, Pull outÂ
Backs are breaking
Pull out, Pull outÂ
This is a difficult choice your making,
And it feels right although it's wrong,
Life grows shorterÂ
Days become long.
Pull out, pull out
Now here's your choice
Pull out, pull outÂ
Take control of that little voice
There's other people to think aboutÂ
Besides you,
Especially if this act is under circumstancesÂ
Untrue.
Pull out, pull outÂ
Before the final push
Pull out, pull outÂ
From life's fiery bush
Seeing too many so unsteadyÂ
Neither of these children are ready,
Pull out, pull out!
Or rather....just wrap it up.
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Comments
Holy moly I don't want to be the oneÂ
interpreting this piece; but it leaves theÂ
reader with thoughts of everything andÂ
that makes it a darn good write;
quite provoking i will sayÂ
best wishes Jai:)
Lol, yeah the title is a bit self exclamatory. I started writing this a while ago and today was a good day to finish. Glad you dug this one thanks.
Hey D!!.........Love the flow and movement of this write.........I agree with JAI...........VERY enigmatic!!......... enjoyed............... Love and Rockets!!............T xo
Thanks T. I hope the message here isn't mixed up, and it was meant to be a good thing not a joke. There is many people who could have taken heed to my message and tons of their children going through all types of struggles that would agree. Glad you stopped by man, it's always good to see your comment on my page.
A fearless poem.Â
If your not covered and not a responsible man my response is pull out. I don't mind a challenge or a controversial write.
Well said. Well meant... And Wise.