Poem -

QUEEN MOON( Jill's Challenge)

Ok not my best effort, to be edited..reworked or probably rewritten🤪🤪 but it's up!!😊😊)

So you are there again
My fine old friend
Playing hide and seek
On the cold days end

Peering out to wink and peek
Through blackened oaken arms
You smile at me, play hide and seek
Delight me with your charms
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Weaving your magic
Through ghostly clouds
Spilling your glow
On the playground below

To light up the hidden
And expose the forbidden
Drink the wicked delights
As you feast this dark night

Whispering secrets
Inspiring thoughts
Exposing a magic
That cannot be bought

For you speak to the souls
Of all those who listen
As you tell of the dark things
Your wickedness glistens

Creating a stage
And setting the scene
To display all your jewels
Queen moon supreme.
Marion Price(2019)

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Jill Tait

OMG this is beautiful Marion, whilst I love Matthew’s, Cheries I abfab adore yours too:))) All Clear Winners in my eyes and Thank you my lovely friend so much ❤️❤️❤️

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Marion Price

Ah..you are all so kind on here Jill...I love these challenges they are a bit of fun to me, shall we ask Mathew to do the next challenge?? I can't wait to see what Kookie thing he will have us write about lol...❤️

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Jill Tait

Aww I’ve just noticed thisun luv haha ay ask Lonely guy(not lonely on Cosmo mind) yes lets give him the next challenge theme teehee xxxxx💕💕😁

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A Lonely Journey

Marionette, 
OK, 15 seconds to write something so beautiful??!! Not fair! 
You and Cheerie and Jillian(and probably Greg), have knocked me down to 79th place, in this field of 4...so I'm pretty pleased with my performance! Thank you! lol. 
You have a great mind, young lady. As do all the other contestants here. You guys could write a poem about phlegm, and it would be wonderful...HEY! New contest!!?? lol. 

Beautiful, Marion. 

HUgs(even with a giant U), 

Matthew. 

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Marion Price

I'm always bloody giggling at your comments Mathew...you are giving me loads of wrinkles...lol. thanks for being so kind my friend...I'm going to check.oit Cherie's ...then I'm going to visit my bed!! 🧡

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Marion Price

Mathew ..your challenge next...what's our subject??? I need a good laugh!! 😆😆

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A Lonely Journey

LOL! 
You're fum, Marionette! And you're welcome, for the wrinkles. Sometimes I iron my face on a medium/ high setting, to get rid of mine, and then I do my shirts...kind of a 2 stones with one bird thing. I'm glad you're visiting your bed. Is it incarcerated somewhere? Well, you better hurry up before visiting hours end, so I'll try not to hold you up. 
I was thinking, maybe, about a contest involving periodontal issues within the shark world. They have sooooo many teeth, there's no way they can keep them all healthy, and clean, yet there are no dentists under the sea! It's an outrage. And people are very high in sucrose, so I'm sure their brushing techniques are not getting to all surfaces. Don't you think there should be some type of oral hygiene program for these gentle beasts? 
I think a contest like that may raise awareness. 
Either that, or Pygmys! 
You pick! 
Thanks! 
M. 

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Marion Price

Mathew..sharks floss on seaweed, I read it on social media so its absolutely true..honest. You must pick..it's your challenge and I just know it will give us a laugh..the wackier the better...can't wait, ps..I'm.going to post the winner...oohhh...exciting!!! 😄😄😄

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A Lonely Journey

Really??!! You are just a fountain of knowledge, young lady! 
No wonder they do not use the mint floss I purchased for them! I thought they were just ungrateful. 
Oooooooooo, I can't wait! Hurry and post it before my corneas give out! 
M. 

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Cherie Sumner-Taylor

Hey Marion!  This is great!  Even though you joined us late in posting your moonlight poem, you proved you are deserve rightful recognition for you creativity and original entry.  I always enjoy your postings.  I am not surprised.  I really enjoyed this fun exercise to try to write on a common topic with others....It really makes this site fun to feel unified..Great work.  xo ;)   

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Marion Price

Yes it does Cherie, really it was Mathews comment to me that started it...can't wait what he will have us writing about!! Thankyou my friend 💕

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Icarus Flocke

like madness
misses the moon.
+++++++++++++

Oh
Love..

how
I
miss
You...

Like
Madness
misses
The MooN.

or
Mourning
DoVeS

(In depths
of Winter.)

crave
The
Month of
June!

   +

The
Monster in
Me
was A Child,

(who
grew up
near a

DeSoLaTe
woOd.)

Roaming
A
HaunTeD
WiLDeRnEsS
WiLd!!!

(Where
The
Cemetery
Of
Love once
stood.)

  +

oh
Love..

how
I
need
You..

like
sHaDoWs
need
ThE SuN.

your
Eyes Are
an
AbYsS
I fall InTo!!

(To
DiscoVeR
we are
OnE.)

j.s.h.

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Marion Price

Bloody hell...you would have won our silly challenge with this!! There is such a great depth to the words you write ...you have such an unique style, I know  you post as nonsense, I wish you wouldn't. Your words always punch me in the stomach and make me re read for what it is I identify with so strongly, but I can never put it into words. I will keep trying...you keep writing. This is ...haunting, actually most of your work is haunting, and beautiful. 🌹🌹

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