Poem -
Queue of Longing
Queue of Longing
Here
In this queue of longing
I stand behind
Impatient poets
Waiting for discarded
Inspiration
Here
I think of you
Most often
Since I intended you
To be a masterpiece
My final indiscretion
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Hello Neville,
The minds of poets and there musing penned nicely here. I sense a lovely nod to a special muse in this write
Gwen :)
You are far too kind Gwen .. Many thanks for checking in .. Oh' and a gentleman never tells .. Wishing you All Good Things tho' ..
Neville :)
Love this. It takes reading and re-reading to get the impact. Perfectly written x
Thanks a bloomin bundle my friend and a big un at that .. always appreciated, ever welcome ..................................... N :) x
You, my friend.....are a poet to the bones.......I Love the splendor within your work!!.......ALL STARS!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo : )
What a lovely thing to suggest .. thank you so bloomin much sir .. what more could an old fella ask just before hitting the sack and at the end of a very long day ..
:)
You... are a fantastic writer my friend. You write about a lost love or a hardly ever began love with such beautiful sarcasm whilst giving a poetic finger to the world.
Your depths make me smile every time x
keep on smiling my friend .. Oh' n that finger has got me into an awful lot of trouble over the years .. x
keep on smiling my friend .. Oh' n that finger has got me into an awful lot of trouble over the years .. x