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Raindrops

Raindrops

They have meaning

they are cleaning                                                                                                  

raindrops are sensitive like feelings                                                                            

one little touch and its form is broken                                                                        

some go to rain to relieve themselves                                                                      

to soothe their sins and to soothe their souls                                                              

raindrops can be mean and hurtful                                                                            

they can crush dreams                                                                                              

they can destroy wishes                                                                                            

but have you ever noticed it rain at a funeral                                                              

the rain is really the past on soul's tears                                                                      

the rain is also a beautiful sign                                                                                    

a beautiful sign of a new day                                                                                      

the rain is a force like no other                                                                                        

its easily noticed and not ignored                                                                               

raindrops are more than just a sad symbol                                                                  

they are but a great and sometimes rough force                                                          

that is always and oddly cleaning                                                                              

to show their true cold meaning 

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Tony Taylor

Hey Insane Whisper!!.........an interesting approach to symbolic logic you took here...........the magic of poetry is shining here...........definitely got me thinking.............looking forward to ore..............your friend and admirer.............T xo

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Tony Taylor

Hey Insane Whisper!!..........you took a very interesting track here with the use of symbolic logic...........raindrops are perfect subject matter for being anything you'd like to them to be.........VERY poetic..........definitely got me thinking...............smiles...........T xo

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Never Unknown

Good job my brother your really turning out to be an amazing rival.

Keep improving! from Never Unknown

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Curious Onlooker

I'm loving it!

"they are but a great and sometimes rough force                                                          

that is always and oddly cleaning                                                                              

to show their true cold meaning"

Love this quote, keep building on those skills 5/5

Curious Onlooker

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Insane Whisper

thanks bro it means a lot and i will continue to build on my beginning endings

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