Poem -

Rank Order

Don’t think for one moment
you might be second best ..

That would be, ridiculous ..

Since you were by no means
whatsoever, that high up the list ..

 

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Lorna

Oooh I thought this was going to be so positive then I was pulled back to earth with a bump
I think somtimes you hope/believe you are close to the top of the pile....
This made me giggle
enjoyed
Lorna xx

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Neville

Giggles are good for you .. as long as they are not at you .. I very much appreciate your well reasoned review Lorna .. Thank you kindly my friend .. Neville xx 

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sparrowsong

Hello Nev...

This sounds angry...

I think we should try and lift each other up...

Hand up...

Not a handout...

​​​​​Thank you for sharing...

sparrowsong

 

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Neville

I can't remember the last time I got really angry but I do have a good memory and stockpiles of old scribbles from which to delve every now and again .. Thanks for stopping by .. Neville 

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sparrowsong

I didn't say "really"...

😁

Everyone gets angry...

Some just a lit more than others...

You know I love your heart...

🤗

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Neville

I do get frustrated but like I said, very rarely angry. Neville 😎👍

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