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Reflections

Fingers press against the glass
I stare at my reflection staring back,
Pinky to pinky, thumb to thumb
I ponder the man that I've become.

With thinning hair and weathered skin
A stubble growth upon my chin,
Ears that sprout with a horses mane
My brow all furrowed like the farmer's lane.

I catch a glimpse of my father there
Standing with a long hard stare',
It's just life son he says to me
It's the way life has to be.

We can't stay young forever 
What would be the point in that,
We'd miss life's great journey
and all that she brings.

And I realize that my eyes still sparkle
With a thirst for life and all its knowledge, 
And I know that he's still in there
That young man I used to be. 

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Phil Hanlon

Thank you, Lee. This is all very new to me. I'm looking forward to learning more and expanding myself a bit. Thanks for your kind words.

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Tony Taylor

Hey PHIL!!...I Love the double entendre of this piece.......and the images that paint the thoughts (reflections) on life's Beauty.....,. and time passing....... this is VERY well conceived and BEAUTIFULLY delivered!!........ excellent formatting highlighting your gift for rhythm and poetic timing .........ALL STARS!!.......a great read...... well done...... and.... WELCOME to COSMO!!......LOVE and ROCKETS!!.......T xo. ?✳✴☀

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Phil Hanlon

Tony, thank you for your kind and if I may say flattering words. I have just started writing poetry so feel a bit out of my depth, so your kind words are a great encouragement. If you can recommend any good learning resources it would be greatly appreciated.

Thanks again.
Phil.

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