Poem -
Refraction
Thoughts mingled
Bent in folds
Wavering, shifting
Through focus
Rainbow smoke
Blurred in the abstract
Deflecting, redirecting
Concentration
Ignore limits
Find the prism
Shattering, piercing
Motivation
Refract inward
Capture the point
Focus, exhale
Then click
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Hey REBECCA!!...... this is SO creatively delivered!!...... haven't read you before (my loss)......I like the way you used the idea of the whole piece being the moment when you finally "click" the picture into existence....... some cool phrasing here as well........ALL STARS....... well done...... great choice for the pic too!!......LOVE and ROCKETS!!........T xo
Oh... thank you so much. I just arrived yesterday so there isn't much to read, but I promise to keep going. I wrote the original about eight years ago, and as I was reading through it this morning it changed. So I redid it and I love it so much more. Your comment and enjoyment has made my day. Thank you.Β
Hello Rebecca...
Very cool picture!
Spoken like a true photographer...
Great write!Β
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
sparrowsongΒ
Hello Sparrow thank you.
This was inspired by a photographer friend of mine. He loved this particular poem and I suppose it is for him that I wrote it.Β
Any who... lol thank you for the read and the comment. Everyone is so nice here. :)
awesome imagery, I love photography! If I had a nice camera I would take gorgeous pictures from all over the world.
Me too Darkly Β :) Thank you for stopping by.Β
Hugs and Blessings, Rebecca