Poem -
Restless
I lie in bed,
thoughts running through my head.
It's a tough night tonight,
impatient for the morning light.
Tonight I miss you more than ever,
yearn for a forever.
Tonight I feel your love from a distance,
picturing you this instance.
Love there has always been,
but tonight there is a love even you haven't seen.
Wishing I lay on your chest,
my mind - body - soul - all then could rest.
Comments
Hi LINZ!!......this write has such a fine sense of rhythm and timing that it sings to me like a song lyric ~
~ "Tonight I feel your love from a distance
Picturing you in this instance...."
A VERY direct and compelling piece.......and a succinctly delivered A,A,B,B rhyme scheme......that quite simply.......WORKS!!......ALL STARS!!......well done dear poet sister!!......and.....in case no one has said so ~ WELCOME to COSMO!!.........LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo 🐧✴❤
Hello!
How very kind. Very glad to be joining a network where I can gain feedback for my work.
Thank you for taking the time to leave a comment - much appreciated!
Linz x