Poem -

Restless

I lie in bed,
thoughts running through my head.
It's a tough night tonight,
impatient for the morning light.
Tonight I miss you more than ever,
yearn for a forever.
Tonight I feel your love from a distance,
picturing you this instance.
Love there has always been,
but tonight there is a love even you haven't seen.
Wishing I lay on your chest,
my mind - body - soul - all then could rest.

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Tony Taylor

Hi LINZ!!......this write has such a fine sense of rhythm and timing that it sings to me like a song lyric ~

                   ~ "Tonight I feel your love from a distance
                       Picturing you in this instance...."

A VERY direct and compelling piece.......and a succinctly delivered A,A,B,B rhyme scheme......that quite simply.......WORKS!!......ALL STARS!!......well done dear poet sister!!......and.....in case no one has said so ~ WELCOME to COSMO!!.........LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo ?✴❤
                       

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Linz

Hello!

How very kind. Very glad to be joining a network where I can gain feedback for my work.

Thank you for taking the time to leave a comment - much appreciated! 
Linz x

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