Poem -
Revelation
Has it ever happened to you?
Oh, that feeling!
An unknown fact divulged
With surprising force.
An uncut diamond
In a sea of coal.
Unravel thy secrets
Sky above!
Thunderous waterfalls!
Billions of droplets
falling and dancing and
tinkling in beautiful synchronicity.
What else does this world have to offer?
What else have I yet to learn?
Widening of eyes.
Power thrumming through the blood.
Turning of nuts and bolts and gears.
Puzzle pieces coming together.
Electrifying.
Rejuvenating.
Awakening.
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It's alright, nice work.
'ppreciateΒ it!
Hey MITSALI !!......I like what you've done here...... excellent word choices that make some very powerful imagery here!!...... it's like reading a colorful cascading waterfall of shining phrases that resonate well and deliver the freedom of life's possibilities!!......ALL STARS!!..... well done...... keep 'em comin' dear poet brother!!.....LOVE & ROCKETS!!.....T xo ?β΄?
Eh, sister if you may,
and thank you so much, I'mΒ touched that you completely grasped what I was trying to portray in this poem.
You truly have a brilliant mind!
Positively Marvelous. I like the imagery you used in the wording, as well as the impact and weight of the words you through behind each line. It is truly something to behold. Not to mention the electricity that flowed throughout the course of it. Still feeling a little Tingly. :Β
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Once again,
you're too kind.
I'm glad you liked it!
I write to please.
Fantastic write.Β Apologies for not coming across this work of art sooner! Incredibly well written and great word usage!
Thank you for your compliment, much appreciated!Β Β :)
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Awe, thank you loads :)
Beautiful refrain.Β
you guys are just on a new level of poetry than me lol