Poem -

Rhapsody in Air

Rhapsody
In plain beige
Requiring an intensity
A creative will that stands tall
A blazing spirit unseen
That transforms mediocrity
A masterpiece is only
If recognized by lost talent
Surrender 
To the overwhelming 
Onslaught of off world genius
Recognize when one is inspired
To listen more intently
Than to translate each disaster
Into the air and reality
I stand affected
By the air and miracles
Translated into
existence
 

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Tony Taylor

WoW SUSAN!!....I haven't read you in a while....so glad I caught this one.....a powerful piece of poetic prose that sizzles in its compelling narrative......I love some of the phrasing here ~

                              ~ "A masterpiece is only
                                  If recognized by lost talent...."

Wow again, that is pure truth poetically presented!!.....ALL STARS!!.....great read/write!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo  : )

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Susan Hill

Hi Tony!!
How are you doing?  It is great to see your fantastic approach to comments
I had not written in a long while, had some health issues and things are 
better thankfully. One does not appreciate their health until it goes south.
These days remind me of the beginning of a great  novel.." It was the best times and it was the worst of times,,,,,,,"  
susan

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