Poem -
River of tears
As a ghostly figure
I appear upon this bridge
Enveloped, in this veil of darkness
As a shadow of sadness
I drift downstream
My heart torn asunder
On past the joyful Water Vole
As the Weeping Willow
Tastes my final tearsÂ
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Welcome to the Cosmo community !!!
Nice write !
Best wishes to you ! Â :)
Thank you Richard
:)
This a great debut piece here (or second write)........regardless, the ambiance you've created here is hauntingly powerful..........well conceived and beautifully delivered...........ALL STARS........and.......WELCOME to COSMO...............T xo
Many thanks Cosmo..Â
Thank you Tony.
I'd have to agree with TT on this, Â strong imagery and emotion..beautiful write :)
Thank you Angel