Poem -
ROCK A BYE
Many will fear...
Many won't...
Many will hide while others stay out in the open...
Many will be in awe of the wonder...
Many will mourn at the sight...
Many will rejoice in the time...
Many well...
sparrowsong
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There are 2 elements to this poem I tend to be attracted to in others' work. I like repetition like we have here with many and I like it when a writer leaves it open to the reader almost to finish off the ideas. The last 2 words sort of invite the reader to carry the poem on. I really like that.
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