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ROCKING THE BANSHEE

ROCKING THE BANSHEE


She... Ushers me in...
With her fresh tea and coffee...
With her incense and scented candles...
In her poncho... With hair flowing free... 
She's... Rocking The Banshee...

It's three foot long and raven...
And she's communing with Cohen...
And she's... Weaving Love Magick...
With gently murmured poems...
She's... Rocking The Banshee...

I am all pollution...
With my 'Lost Weekend' fever...
And... Scraps of marijuana...
And supplies for the sanctuary...
And we combine and unify...
With Murphy as our witness...
Rocking The Banshee...
Rocking The Banshee...

She'll get lost for hours...
With her Heroes of the Harbour...
Who'll supply red wine and Guinness... 
On her lost mission for soya and kiwi's...

And she'll crawl back to the lighthouse...
And commune once more with Cohen...
With her raven tresses flowing...
Rocking The Banshee...
Rocking The Banshee...
Rocking The Banshee...

Now... She's listening to 'The Darkness'...
And writhing with its pain...
Complete and understood of it's deepest meanings...
'At War (and yet, still at one) With The Mystics'...
Again... And again.... And again...

Shifting soundtracks of the wind and waves...
Rattling through... 'The Lighthouse' birdcage...
'The Tempest', tempered with Cohen, Floyd, Gypsy Jazz and Blues...

And flowered with Cosmic Poetry and erotic 'Birthday Letters' By Hughes...
And all the while Murphy whines and smiles...
Whilst she... Adorned in poncho... 
(Is)... Rocking The Banshee...

 

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Ru T

Great narrative, good use of metaphor. Interesting character depictions.

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Tony Taylor

STUNNING!!..... what a great song lyric!.... and if this isn't a song it damn well should be...... I'm a songwriter!!..... and this my friend..... is friggin' awesome!!..... wish I had more time BLAKE!!...... suffice, it to say......PINNED for perfection!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo
Ps.LOVE all the references to Pink Floyd & Cohen throughout!! ~ and I know it runs much deeper than that!!....

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BLAKE FLOYD

Wow, wow, wow!
Tony!
What can I say man, I am deeply honoured, flattered and gratified!!!

And yeah ... Your damn right on all counts...
It is a song, I wrote last weekend, full of deep layers of inspiration, (and not least Cohen & Pink Floyd haha??)
in bursts of verses, that just fell onto the page, practically succinct and complete... cool when that happens eh?!...
And then yesterday at first chance of picking up my guitar, pretty much same thing happened with the chords, melody and rhythm... 
Hey, it does need a lot of polishing work... Yet, Somehow, it just feels right!
So many, many thanks for taking the time to read and for your kind words and encouragement... You have inspired me to take it to the next step/level/phase and actually record it properly!

Rock on mate! Cheers!X

 

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