The Rose That Grew Into Concrete

The Rose That Grew Into Concrete
Fragile known to be my birth,
In this steel encrusted world or lands,
Born not as a boy of power and might,
Nor even an introverted delicate girl,
of gentle hands.
I grew from thought,
a mere seed without warning,
Of one mind, a seedlet, not of,
mere mortal harvest.
Constructed in an image once pure,
now cast into darkness,
As I struggle to stay afloat,
in a boat abstracted of sails,
But from the appetite of a martyre,
whose heart now I impel.
A fight I fought unwillfully
and not promised to me the win,
My enemy well skilled, though I all alone,
my patience worn thin,
Body not of armored weapons,
never anywhere to be found,
My only means of defense,
was the reservoirs,
From the torn and ravaged
played-on battle grounds.
My battles have became many,
but defeats quite few,
To kill and be killed, was the ominous life,
that I grew and knew.
My shelter reserved to me by the elements,
Their dependability and I collide,
only means of moral support, by me.
Stood fast, me only, on my side,
That lonely little soldier in me,
Did not coward, run and hide.
Many times alone I’ve reminisced,
Of the old but no not, I’ve ever cried.
The grounds for which I’ve stomped,
Are marred of destruction and devastation
I bear witness to many, of my kind,
Humiliated, lacking felicitously, degredated..
So alone I must now stand,
In a world full of sorrow,
guided by the corrupt,.
Forced to defend,
My scar barren,
Petals and brothers
And never to give up
Jim
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a beautiful poem jim and although i cant analyse it so good as williamsJl hes one of the best on site i can sympathize with the lonely piece a rose growing in concrete battling against other things by yourself maybe in a different way to you but the same in others we all fight for what we want and are sometimes left alone
your mum which you did a great job of helping and continue to do so is a battle not lost you are a rose in concrete but continue to grow which is a good sign we are all with you in mind and soul to help you in the battle best wishes to your mum jim all the best
tina
Sorry for the late response Tina,
But as always,i cherish all that you say, do and stand for, you Like brother William, has set a lot of minds and hearts at ease, just by showing homage to a simple poem, that may make a difference in the life of a person, whom may just need someone to listen to their plight, through their poem. You, Willam, Shah,Shirley,Chris,Sayed and Susan and many more, are great for this form of needed support, by us all, at one point are another
Thank you Brother William,
Any and all words from you, are those of gold and to be cherish for all times to come.For yours is the stamp of approval ...
Stay you and stay kind, my good friend and dear brother,
Jimmy Lee Arnold
I am not a great commenter, but I know enough to know your are, not only a great commenter but a great poet.. :) I always wondered if there was a rose growing in the middle of a busy highway.. Should one stop and pick it, run over it... or stop along side the road to gaze upon it.. :)
Loved your poem , Take care..
John
Extremely well appreciated dear sir and it goes to show you are as well, if not better..
Jim
And you Dear Chris is a man of great honor and a mark well made, have you on this site and to your talents, cease no end..
Take Care,
Jimmy