Poem -
Rouge Ruin
Twas nowt happenstance
Thus twilight advance
Orbis epic splendor
Neon phase did render
Sultry caresses procured
Fleet tis fate endured
Daggers sanguine glean
Smote Goddess Selene
Oβ how treachery stings
Borne on idle wings
Aurora elicits ebon sky
Mercy instills no reply
Patience addle heart
Await renewed impart
Ousted starry tribune
Arise inferno rouge ruin
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Comments
wonderful poemΒ
thank you Greg I'm totally obsessing with the editing. I read through it over and over changing the wording. oh how I hate editing. I'm just not happy with the outcome
Well thatβs good I do that sometimes Iβm not happy Iβll read it over and over and over and over till I think itβs just good then once I put it up I look over it again if I see spots that right I edit it again not easy being a writer sometimes
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I love these lines!Β So very, very poetic. 5 stars from me! x
thank you Being me...Oh how I hate the outcome of this write. I keep re-reading it and changing the wording....
Hahaha... I think we all feel like that and do that with our own work all the time lol x
true...my husband can't understand why I post it then change it over and over again...I sometimes hate having OCD when it comes to my writing lol
Though I have no clue what this poem means I like that the language is so impressive and unique. Old style. Good work.Β
It a play on words, that when dawn comes it's like murdering the moon. the reds of the sunrise is the moon bleeding away...thank you for stopping by
Wonderful work ?
Thank you kindlyΒ
I have no words, my mind is overflowing with ideas and it's all because of your artΒ
Thank you kindly Simon.Β