Round the Bend
Round the Bend
Buried deep in Devil’s Canyon rests a town named, Round the Bend.
Born of secrets, desecration—townsfolk there enjoyed their sin.
Fornication—loud and dirty—in the streets, was seen and heard.
Education was forsaken—as was God’s own Holy Word.
Holy Bibles were forbidden, no religion could there be.
Vigilante law rode roughshod—doled out harsh, quite painfully.
Mayhem was so commonplace—a day in desert paradise.
Some men turned to theft and murder just to glean a paltry prize.
The Farrell Gang, them evil boys, they surely wuz the worst.
Them townsfolk, they would all harangue–they'd kill to quench their thirst.
Their bloodlust knew no rivals in that tiny desert town.
You crossed their path–evoked their wrath–they’d surely put you down.
A Man in Black rode into town, a fella no one knew.
To the saloon to knock’em down—decide what he would do.
Some sullied patrons soon spoke out, “You wanna wind up dead?
Then git back on yer horse, son, we're about to take yer head.”
The Man in Black, he never flinched, not a single muscle moved.
Without so much as glancing back, he seemed so calm, so smooth.
Inside him, fiery hatred burned for each nasty Farrel Boy.
Storms churned within, their foolish sin, he would gladly soon destroy.
“You look a might familiar, friend,” Jeb Farrel soon exclaimed.
"If you’re comin’ here to do us in, I’m a’feared, it’s all in vain.
Unlike you Gus, we like a fuss, so stop ‘fore you begin.
You’d best go on, just turn around—'cause you cain't never win."
The skies grew dark, the town's dogs barked, then howled, as if in pain.
The man in black took two steps back as ev’ry corded vein
bulged from his neck, folks hit the deck, as fire fell from the skies.
That Man in Black, to their surprise, shot flames from coal black eyes!
The Farrel bunch, they had no hunch, just who this dark man was.
The town burned down, dead all around, quite simply, just because,
all those within in that putrid place were nothin’ but pure evil.
As all the wickedness they’d sown was wiped out by the Devil.
The Dark Man sneered, dire demons cheered, he ruled now, once again.
Sin, death and hate–things shunned and feared–restored his evil reign.
Some say, should you stray, near to where those townsfolk lie there waitin’,
you’ll feel the fate of Round the Bend, a town too vile for Satan.
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deep and dark. You are a great writer of darkness my friend. I love your style
Thanks for taking the time to read this rather lengthy story poem, Greg.
I sincerely appreciate your positive feedback as well as your time.
Peace,
~Dean ✌️
Dude!!.... this is truly eloquent.... all the perfect colloquialisms ......the gritty dialogue...... the wild west painted poetically as the books and films would have you believe..... that added detail of the Devil ridin' into town is VERY effective here..... of course you have to have perfect rhythm & timing to pull it off..... and a 'Way Cool' imagination...... well conceived and BEAUTIFULLY delivered!!..... Love it bro!!..... Kick ass write!!....... smiles.....T xo ??✴✴?✴✴✌
I've been working on this one for quite awhile now, Tony.
It's for publication in Perpetual Motion Machine's Dark Moon Digest. It should be out in print by July or August.
Having said that I really appreciate the constructive and positive feedback on the poem. If you saw anything you believed might need changing do not hesitate to let me know.
Thanks again, my friend.
~Dean :)
It's a pleasure reading poetry as high-quality as this man......I read it over again.... and the flawlessness of this piece is what makes it so damn good....... the only thing I would change (or add, depending..)..... is two commas..... in the final stanza ~
~ Some say, should you stray, near to where those townsfolk.....
........and it's not necessary.... just thought it would be in keeping with the flow of the whole....... just me though...... it really is outstanding.... not surprised it's being published!!....... peace......T ❤ ✌
The commas have been added, as suggested, Tony.
Thanks!
~Dean :)
This is AWESOME!!! I love the way you changed your terminology and speech to the era this write was aimed. You had me captivated all the way through. Story telling is always such a strength of yours. Really enjoyed and pinned xxx ❤️❤️❤️
Thanks very much for reading, Lucy. I'm really glad you enjoyed this.
I love to write story poems although they are a LOT of work.
Comments like yours make it all worthwhile.
Horror Hugs!
~Dean :}
???? absolutely brilliant storytelling/ poem! Fantastic imagination hahaha just a cool read throughout ????☮?
Thanks a million, Wayne.
I'm so glad you enjoyed the story.
Take care, my friend, and thanks so much again for reading.
~Dean :)
Dear Dean,
The man in black came ridin' in
To cure "Round The Bend" of it's deadly sins
For they had taken the Devil's name in vain
And not even He could accept their bane
.
So he burned the town down to the ground
A trace of no one ever found
Then he went back home to His abysmal lair
Hell hath no fury like the Devil's stare
Peace and Love,
Larry xxx