Poem -
An absolute lie
til DEATH do us part
your death or just mine?
to another dimension
or death from no time
I died from knowing you
it was only the same
as dying to losing you
the same foolish game
til DEATH do us part
you mean when I'm in hell?
when we share separate coffins
or when I'm sick and you're well?
I died again and again
I died from our split
I died from your words
I died when you quit
til DEATH do us part
absolutely!
once you are "gone"
or once gone yours truly
for ever and now
is an absolute lie
"death" is living here
and exists when I die
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Hey BB!!........this is a very powerful write girlfriend!!.........I think I know where this is coming from........and if I'm correct then I'd have to say..........this is my favorite poem of yours.........it has a great rhythm and rhyme scheme to it...........the repetition of " 'til death do us part"...gives this great continuity and flow for the reader..............excellent write sister girl!!..........well done...........T xx
As always thank you Tony. Honestly this poem came out of no particular thought or event. The word 'death' has always been abstract to
me. . Also the pain of any separation can be as painful as 'death' and so that's what I was getting at. Further more..nothing is permanent! Anyway. ..just another day playing with words...thanks for reading and the compliments. .
Wow BB!!.......thanx so much for laying that out for me.........I think I like it even better now........VERY creative girlfriend..........and I SOOO agree with your notions about death.........so much so that I write about that very same subject matter on my blog ALL the time..........again, thanx for being cool sister girl!!.........love to you.............smiles.................T xx
I have to read your blog more. Yes..I remember. .♡♡♡