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S.t..r..e...t...c....h

S.t..r..e...t...c....h

The rubber band starts completely contracted
not realizing how life will be impacted.
Parents & children housed safely inside,
leaning on the Lord & intuition as guide.

Unaware of all the means of danger-
accidents, choking, or a luring stranger.
Time's hourglass of sand marches steadily on,
the band stretching further with each breaking dawn.

The slack, it wanes with each new phase
as we travel thru life's most intricate maze.
While somehow thinking they can go untouched...
to any shred of innocence we're firmly clutched.

Too soon it's driving & independent thought,
puberty, fitting in ~ the band becomes taut.
Enabling more self-guided decision
while worrying about their clouded teenageย vision.

At times we reflect on a memory, remiss;
other moments we enjoy with euphoric bliss.
To shorten the band is our selfish ambition
while breaking it is their sole, concerted mission.

Void of all stretch, about to burst
maturity in place that can't be reversed...
Knowing full well the training is done,
we cut them loose to adulthood begun.

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Richard Waters

Incredible write.

Unusual application of experience related to characteristics of a rubber band produces a work you can only be proud of.

Such an interesting idea makes a great read !

All the best to you. ย :)

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Jacki Goebel

Thanks Richard! ย I've had the idea of parenting in contrast to letting a rubber band stretch on my mind for quite some time...just finally got the words on paper. :) ย It's so natural to want the rubber band to snap back so we can protect them & hold onto them for a bit longer... ย Appreciate the feedback very much!*!*!

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Jacki Goebel

Thanks Cherie! ย My 12-year-old wasn't impressed with the word "puberty" having to be in it - ha! ย Good to have this thought on paper after it's lingered in my brain for quite some time... ย Blessings!*!*!

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Tony Taylor

YOU!!..... dear Poetess!!..... have some serious skills blossoming within that creative mind of yours....... powerful metaphors put forth in stellar poeticย phrasing and formatting....... keeping the metering and timing together is no easy task......ALL STARS!!....... great creativity....... well conceived & delivered!!........ LOVE and ROCKETS!!........T xo.ย  ?โœณโœดโ˜€

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Jacki Goebel

Wow, Tony, I am humbled by your words! ย It's great to be writing again and in the company of people like you out here that get and appreciate poetry. ย It's intriguing to see all of the topics & styles... ย Thx for reading & responding! ย Blessings!*!*! ย  Jacki

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Jacki Goebel

Thanks Lisa, means a lot coming from you!*!*!

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