Poem -

Sadness

The sad thoughts overpower the good ones you have. The horrible experiences you have had, always stay with you and take a very long time to get overtime. When you believe that you are overcome them you really haven'tĀ  They are just trapped in a place that you cant get into but anything can trigger. You try to stay happy and positive at all time but that's a task in itself because those memories take over how you feel and view things. They sometimes should play the part to be happy just for the sake of the people around them but deep down they are struggling.Ā 

They put on a mask and take every day as it comes because that's the only thing they do. They don't understand what's the point of living when all they have experiences is sadness in their life and any ounce of happiness is short lived because them negative experiences Ā  take over.Ā  You ty to be happy but what is happiness, we all have our own perspective on what happiness is but some haven't found that yet. Some don't even feel that in their life's.

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sparrowsong

Hello Sana...

It's very true!

Suicide statistics and the pharmacies filling anti-depressant medications everyday...

Does not exclude the self medicated though they too can go in the death department...

Great write!

Great message!

Thank you for sharing...

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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Sana.A

Hi sparrowsong,

Thank you so much for your kind words. They really mean alot to me, plus i wanted to talk to to write about something that people can relate to you in their way.

Thank you again

Love fromĀ 
Sana x

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Keith Fitzsimons

Very good write! You are reeled in from the very first line and continue to get deeper into it! Well done!

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Sana.A

Hey Keith,

Thank you so much for your kind words, i really appreciate you taking the time to read my work.

From
Sana :)

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Tony Taylor

Hey SANA!!.....missed you around here girlfriend!!.....this is a VERY insightful look into the depressing fact that happiness can be so fleeting and experienced so rarely.....I hope this is a fictional write and not about you personally.....because you're always so nice and friendly in your comments.....anyway, .....tons-O-stars!!...well done dear poet sister!!.....LOVE and ROCKETS!!.....T xo ?ā˜€āœ“āœ³ā™„?♄?

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Sana.A

Hey Tony,
Ā Thank you so much for reading my work as always, Really means alot to me, the write is fictional and personal at the same time...always a pleasure to hear from you.

From
Sana :)
Ā 

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Larry Ran

My Dear Sana,

Your heartfelt words have inspired me to write a Tanka, dealing with the "Sadness" you so aptly described.Ā  I shall be publishing it tomorrow.
All stars to you for this penetrating write.

Hugs, Peace and Love,
Larry xxx

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Sana.A

Hey Larry,

So nice to hear from you and thank you so much for reading my work. Really does mean alot to me. I'm glad that inspired you in some way.

From
Sana :)

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Larry Ran

Dear Sana,

I have written the poem inspired by you, but won't be posting it for a few days, because I'm publishing "Happy Works" right now.

Hugs, Peace and Love,
Larry xxx

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Leah Yodico

Very didactic // it's true- happiness is ephemeral but can be fruitful as well//

great inkĀ 

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Sana.A

Hey Leah,

Thank you so much for your kind words

Love From
Sana xx

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