salty hope
If my tears were the rain
you'd be flooded in
falling deeper in
If my tears were the rain
I'd cry an ocean deep
I'd cry an ocean wide
until there were no more tears welled up inside
But when those tears are gone
his icy grip will stay
it'll take me far below
Into depressions bay,
he would hold me until my braking point
the out of sadness I would go
Everything would go black
no worries anymore
because I took my life to get rid of him and the door
He's moved on to another
and I realized what I've done
I let him take me over and now my life is done
I'm sorry I caved in
I'm sorry I didn't cry
I'm sorry I didn't let you in
now I'm just a memory locked up from within
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Written with such poignant emotion. Very real. Very
Thank you so much , Lost .
an amazing peice of writing that shows true pain
the writing flows and wprds join together , it enflicts your emotions onto another person
sorry i mean shares
Great pen dear poet sister!!!......definitely deserving of the nod from administration!!....,,ALL STARS!!......a pleasure to read!!......well done EMMA!!......LOVE and ROCKETS!!......T xo ?✴♥☀♥♥
Thank you so much Tony , I am honored for the great response from you , I love all your poetry , thank you for reading
lots of love moi , Emma ?
Wow,you know how to put those words together. A true talent is here.All the best.
Thank you so much Barbara Kieran ?
Wow this poem is so beautiful
Thank you so much
Great work
Wow! Amazing words!! However I would say I believe it is best to stay a memory then depression bay. Sending love and hugs xxxxxxxxxx
Yeah ? thanks for your lovely comments
hugs and kisses from moi
Thanks a lot I appreciate it