Poem -
Seasons
Spring said get out of my way Winter, time for you to go,
Winter replied I just have to give them a few more storms before I go,
No! said Spring,your being greedy, it’s my turn,
No! said Winter, Spring turned livid,
I will have you under my feet just as surely as Summer will have me under hers,
Go away, they need my trees full of robins, my flowers, emerald grass,
Don’t be sad Winter she said as she wiped away his crystalline tears,
You will be bossing Fall around before you know it.
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Comments
Love it ...brilliant
Thank you so much,always fun to write a light hearted poem.?Best to you always.
Lite, airy written with a smile.
that was fun and we all watch these arguments between the seasons
well written
john
Sorry John I missed your comment reply somehow.Your
are such a poet I appreciate your feedback always.?
Hello Barbara...
Awesome my friend!
Thank you for sharing...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Thanks sparrowsong appreciate your comments always.?
Here’s to laugh,love your description.Yeah Winter in this poem never gives up trying to rule the other Seasons but is always held in check by the suffer no fools gladly
Spring.So o.k. Spring may have had a tad of the berry to deal with the Season that
drags on forever.But she also is tender to him while she boots him out.I never had
such a laugh sending comments.Sending a winter hug ? from the brat Old Man Winter.The best to you always.??❄️❄️⛄️☃️??❄️❄️
P.S. Hope it ends soon! ☹️
interesting take on the seasons, looking forward to spring taking over
Lorna x
Thank you so much Lorna,can’t wait for new life,colours,smells etc..We’re so
lucky to have 4 seasons,never gets boring.?
Yes I had fun writing this one and we all need a laugh sometime.Thank you for your
comment.?
Beautiful. Keep them coming. xoxoxo
Thank you Bella boo,luv luv to you.❤️?
So excited,hear me squealing lol.Dignity out the window.Just what I needed at this time.Thank you Cosmofunnel,thanks to all,hugs to all.????❤️❤️❤️
well deserved I really enjoyed the confrontation of the seasons having witnessed them for many years the word play was well done.
great read.
John
Thank you John,I’m so pleased to have won the contest.And I always enjoy
comments from such a deep and talented man.Best always.
Congratulations Barbara!
yeah! I'm done with winter.
thanks for sharing.
Thanks so much,I smelled spring
in the air the other day with full on
sunshine.Next day it snowed lol,
she's fighting with Winter still.??
this is terrific Barbara, enjoyed the creative playful interaction, and yeah! congrats on winning the prize, cheers pal
Thank you Christopher for your great comment.I just seen it now,I’ve been sick for
awhile,hope to write some more poems soon,hope everything is well with you and yours.Hug.