Poem -
SeCrEtS...
These are truths that you
should never have whispered...
Can you take them back?
No...it is too late, I think
They are no longer innocent...
No longer shadows...that flit
and scamper like children
They are voices now
Loud and louder...
Grown and multiplied...
Adult....and...matured...
TheyΒ roam my head
Inhabit it...
growing, expanding, stretching
Bursting the seams
Screaming to escape
Screaming...Β
To...Β
Escape...
You can't take it back...
And I...Β
Can't...
Keep...
It...Β
Marion Price(2020)
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Wonderfully written piece Marion, pinned for the perfection
Thankyou Lisa π
Once something has been said it is out there!Β Words can wound... I know there are times when something needs to be said, but sometimes there are things better left unsaid.
Another fab write x
Appreciate your support Tina...thankyou. You know I was thinking about docs and priests when I wrote this...wondering where the cut off was between confidentiality and public interest you know? Can you imagine some of the stuff they must carry in their heads?? ...hugs π
Smashing write! I would have missed it too if it wasn't for Tina! I too face this fact of scars that never healed, especially from Little FishΒ Poem, the whole reason I moved to poetry to share my feelings... Although I managed to move away (escape my problems) I couldn't imagine still being in that situation... I hope poetry gives you some freedom for you Marion. And remember we are all here for you. Kind regards. The Fish of the Sea
Thanks love...poetry is a great way to dump.emotions...on others!! π€© Seriously ...I have found it so healing...hugs π
An interesting and popular topic, Marion, there are two things everyone keeps - secret and mask.
5* comment to you Yiyan love that quote "secret and mask"
Wow Yiyan what wise wise words...excellent material for a poem!! π€©π€©
Everyone said it well.....another Truly insightful and poetically stirring piece!!.......You go girl!!.......smiles......T xoΒ : )
Thanks Tony...appreciated my friend π
Oh dear! I won't tell you any then!
I prefer not to be told myself, then I can't repeat. Of course this has deeper meaning than just that, I hope it was cathartic to write. Wonderfully written and presented. π
Ha ha..lol...I am actually quite trustworthy Pen...π...I was thinking about doctors and clergy...wondering where the cut off was between confidentiality and public interest. Thankyou so much love π
You know when I was typing my reply I started to say I wonder how priests must feel after a day full of confessions? And then years?
But I felt that I was waffling on your page so I stopped. π
Hey Pen..I am.always waffling on others people's pages..lol. Never be afraid to waffle...it's how conversations start...ππ Thankyou so much love π
Showing the intensity and frustration in this arrangement and words with these secrets. Very well written as always! You always have a very good way with words. Pxπ
Thankyou ...hugs π
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This is brilliantly written... I have often felt like this and so can relate very well to your words here.Β
Thanks Samantha...appreciated love π