The Sensation of a Love

I could love you ocean, like I love the people, but your cold and too ambitious. Let's settle the thought now and here that you will never get close before you recede to a one you want as long as I am here. She said it was alright to bang, on the tide even on high. Don't get delirious when you witness the beauty and the sensation though. Just you wait and see how it goes away so fast. You'll wish you could start over especially when the sun comes around, and you walk out to your car and drive home to the special radio song that plays your best night ever tune. Get the top rolled back and hitch it down the freeway. Don't ever forget me cause you can never get the replay of this night. Oh yeah, salt water smell good night...
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you got a unique way of writing prose Richard....I rolled with the tone and it took me to a good place, the write sounds like something I've not heard a thousand times before.... so thank you for staying true to yourself, terrific and very respectful of the art form....in appreciation of the post, good night....
Thank you Christopher. When I write things that you can guess what the next line is going to be I feel fake. I just end up erasing it all and starting over. I love deep emotion and abstract ideas that paint concrete images. Thanks though.
Hi Richard Estey,
Congrats, your poem is now being promoted on our F.B page.
Glide on love.
The Cosmofunnel team.
Yikes!!! Lol.
Hello Richard...
Thanks for bringing back...
Great Memories for me...
Thank you for sharing...
Great write!
Congratulations on your F.B. Promotion!
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Thank you Sparrow. I love your name by the way, it makes me happy and I love seeing it on here. I wrote this from some of the experiences I've had in California. I like to write from personal experiences using concrete imagery.
Peace & love,
Rich