Poem -
Shady Sky
Night is in an abyssÂ
Stars are nowhere to be found
A tremble event is bound
I saw it a mile ago
This things would happen soon
Where your shadows disappear
Under this shady sky
I just hope morning will come soon
And forget this regretful day
You left me alone
Under the shady sky
Oh wait, it's past five!
A new hope will shine
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Hello AMENE!!....and welcome to Cosmo......a fine debut piece....I can see/feel the German messing with your intent.....your intent is beautiful.....but little things are messing with your flow...
Your first 2 lines would be better received with this VERY minor adjustment......please note *
* Night is an abyss
 Stars are nowhere to (be) found.....
Without the (be) ...your intent is interrupted....
I hope this wasn't taken in a negative way....just trying to help you my poetic friend!!......Hope you continue here.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo : )
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