Shallow Fortress
Red ribbon dress soft and flowing floral.
Brown furry ebony black small slippers.
Snakes and toads when she talks bitter.
Flowers and diamonds when she talks nice.
Red marks hiding tugs at the dress from the hiding / hitting.
Furrowed in brown ropes of bad composure.
Ribbons of lies he feeds her.
Lovingly stroking her ebony hair.
Bad temper from his frustrations, can't scream , save or scratch at.
Shallow Fortress is the place where they stand.
His eyes stoned red, hers red from tears her stalking , him avoiding... the truth.
Furry small slippers they should have been leather like his belt, sturdy enough to run over his jagged tongue.
Away from the hiding.
The hidden others he embraces along with spreading himself a shallower morality.
Imbalances in that Fortress.
Imbalances in his scoldings.
Soft touching and little lines of lies to keep her around.
Edges closer to being kind enough to hang you.
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Smashing poem Liliana! Love the list formate very very clever. Peace to you! Hope you are well. Kind regards, your friend Max
Thank you Max.
Intriguing write! RUN!.....................................Jim
Yes my point exactly.
Wow...well haven't we all been here!! A fantastic write of a toxic relationship Liliana ....you have really managed to convey the intricate pull and push...great stuff 💕
Yes we have.
Pity that.
I hope you are good.
I am fine Liliana, I hope you are in a good place also...hugs 🤗
"ribbon" to me a metaphor in this piece, and will she be hung by it? Quite intriguing.
Thank you.