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Shape of Love

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Hossein Amirkahrizi

Love's like a vernal rain shower,
Rushes unannounced,
Fades prematurely,
Soaks you in her euphoria,
Leaves you with a pneumonia.

Love's like an autumnal drizzle,
Arrives seasonably,
Departs elegantly,
Gently fondles your skin,
Allows rehearsal on her scene.

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Marion

Beautifully described Hossein 🌻🌻

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RG

Very resonating and relatable read, especially " fades prematurely" yet another beautiful poem Hossein! 
❤️, 🌟'$ and pinned. ~Rob 

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RG

Your welcome :)

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