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Shark Attack

Shark Attack

The quiet of the ocean
laid beneath me on my board,
It was early morning
and a flock of seagulls soared,
The waves were lapping softly
as I began to stand,
My feet took their position
My paddle in my hand, 

I dance across the water
pushing forward, left and right,
The breeze brushed up against me
Warm and welcoming delight,
Then suddenly I felt a 'thud'
It was subtle, but distinct,
And then before I knew it
I was headfirst in the drink,

I struggled to regain my air
I swam up to the top,
I felt a tightness on my leg
I pulled, but it didn't stop,
I reached into the water
couldn't see it was so dark,
I felt that tightness of my leg
Was in the jaws of a great white shark,

I started shaking violently
And hit him with my paddle,
He pulled me underneath the blue
And now it was a battle,
I hit him hard, I felt release
I scrambled to the top,
I grabbed my board and pulled myself
And out of breath, I didn't stop,

Tears were running down my face
I thought I heard a scream,
I felt him tugging on my foot
I'm having a bad dream,
The wind picked up, I caught a wave
It pulled me in to shore, 
I think I made it just in time
For being at death's door,

I lived to tell....
I made it back....
The story of....
MY SHARK ATTACK!

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Faith Van Riel

Thanks Tina, it sure didn't happen to me, I have a good imagination...lol

Faithx

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S.zaynab.kamoonpury

Wow u sure have a most impressive imagination for u write it so vividly and described the scenes like one who experienced it. A shark in the dark in the ocean oh my only daredevils could manage it. Rhymed creatively awesome. Great narrative. Kudos.

I'm quite a newbie here, but have been writing and interacting for ages Pleez write your thoughts/comment on my newest poem, titled , "jumbo jet vs jays" too. I luv meeting poem pals,  
I like to know different conclusions and say hi to friends thereby in this cold world.

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Larry Ran

Dear Faith,

The great white shark was after me
But I fought him "tooth" and nails
I kept my wits about me
As my leg he tried assail

.
I hit him with my paddle
I felt his jaws release
I looked up to the Heavens
Yelled "Help me God oh please"

.
Then I saw a golden ray of sunshine
As the wind brought me a wave
I knew that He had heard me
And my life He then had saved

Love,
Larry xxx

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