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She

She

She let me draw her naked.

Elastic entities intertwined on an overcast night
No one understood the power of the Moon until the pencil stopped moving
Her curvature was flawless
Unlike my lines
She was the embodiment of fine art
And I a sketchy cartoonist
Trying to replicate her was insulting
Michelangelo couldn't capture her
Leonardo couldn't fathom her
Nothing could capture her sense of evil or the Height of her Divine
She was naked without clothes
I was naked fully covered
The emptiness was filled
I had found my other

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Valerie Beasley...

Jackson…This is an excellent write!!!  Love the way you have used the pencil to cover and uncover hues and tones of feeling and emotion in this exceptional write!  You have my vote!

val

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Carey Milton

Beautifully  written Jackson, felt everything you were expressing about her here big vote from me also! x

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April Mitchell

I enjoyed this very much.The ending i found my other was so sweet and romantic i am still smiling.:-) see

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WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

Jackson Taylor

Congrats on your winning nomination. Regards WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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