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She came to me in a dream

She came to me in a dream

She came to me in dream
I was at her door
About to leave
Mum came walking up to me
Like I always remembered her to be
As herself
Walking from her kitchen to see me
I was at the front door
She walked up
And hugged me
To say goodbye
It felt so real
The feelings
The moment
I woke up
And remembered it clearly
It was still the very early hours
Of the morning
And I went back to sleep
Waking up again to get ready
I just knew
today was going to be the day....
Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  I was sitting beside her
Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Later that morning
Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  Β  With my family
.....as she passed away

24-10-21Β πŸ™πŸ½

It's been two weeks since my mum passed away peacefully. I am only just processing it all in now. Still feels surreal. Strange. She had been very unwell and this year has been very emotional. We are very grateful that we got to spend time with her, took photos and videos and were there til the end to hold her hand.

This was my dream that very last day. Jai Shree Krishna πŸ™πŸ½

With Love Pratibha πŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œ

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Jim "The Lad" ....

love dreams! so glad you shared Pratibha! prayers!..................................Jim

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Pratibha Savani

Thank you kindly Jim πŸ™πŸ½πŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œ

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linda lank

well written poem keep writing Linda

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Pratibha Savani

Thank you Linda πŸ™πŸ½πŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œ

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Shaun Cronick

You've done your treasured mum I believe most proud Pratibha with your most respectful and empathetic poem.
Hope all is well with you and your immediate family around supporting you and each other.Β 
A loved one's cherished memory regardless of time never ever truly fades and one day at a time my friend.Β  Take care. Shaun. x

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Pratibha Savani

Thank you Shaun for reading. Writing has been my resolution and saviour capturing my emotions and thoughts, in this case a dream. Pxxx

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Marion

From the depths of a soul who understands...to you and yours...❀❀❀

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Pratibha Savani

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I know thank you 😘

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Gwendoline

Hello P, I am so very sorry to learn of your mums passing. Sending so much love to you and your family πŸ’— Dreams can be such powerful things, I could feel the love between you both in yours. So so very sorry Lovely friend ❀️

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Pratibha Savani

Hi Gwen. Thank you for reading. I have missed you. I told my family of this dream that day too. It was just amazing to see their reaction and what a poignant thing to have on that day. I miss my mum but have comfort we had time with her. Chat soon. Pxxx

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Greg Etsell

Wonderful poem
it is very hard to lose your mom
My mom passed away 2006
you get over them passing but you never get it over with them being gone It hurts very muchΒ 

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Pratibha Savani

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Greg thank you I remember our messages about your mum. I'm still processing it and no doubt something will trigger me off in the days and months to come. Pxxx

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sparrowsong

Hello Pratibha...

I'm so sorry for your and your family's loss...

That's really what are for right to carry the people we love and miss with us wherever we go...

Dreams certainly can warn us of so many things...

​​​​​​Writing is definitely a form of therapy and as healing when you can start to begin...

​​​​​​Beautiful and sad write!

Thank you for sharing...

Sending hugs!

sparrowsong

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Pratibha Savani

Hi Sparrowsong
thank you for reading and this lovely comment. Really appreciate it. Writing is definitely been a good way to help note feelings.
I will miss my mum but happy we had time as she was very I'll and it was expected...but my grief has been in werid stages throughout this emotional year.
thank you for liking my poem and pin. Its become one of my favourites now.
you'll have to tell me your name.
Pratibha x
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sparrowsong

I meant that's what hearts are for right?

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Terry Reeves

Hi P,
Condolences to you and your
family. I hope you are ok.
Love,
Terry.
xoxo :)

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Pratibha Savani

Hi Terry. Thank you for your message. Really appreciate it. I am doing ok. It will take time.Β 
I havent been on here for a while so thats been lovely.
Px

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lodigiana

Dear Pratibha, your words really touched my heart..I am Β so sorry for your loss.My Mother died some months ago and although I am at peace with it ..I just miss her so much.Dreams can be such a comfort and help and I hope that because of them your Mother will always feel close to you.A beautiful piece. Lodigiana x
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Pratibha Savani

Hi Lodigiana. Apologies in the late reply and happy new year!
Thank you for your kind words. Sorry to hear about your mum too.Β 
Like you I'm at peace too, we had time with her. But do miss her. I often think about her and sometimes it's just something so little.
Take care also. lots of love to you Px πŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ™πŸ½
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John Prophet

Hi PS,

so sorry for your loss. Both my parents came to me in dreams after they died.
Felt as though they wanted me to know they were alright.
This has given me comfort over the years to think they’re happy in a different place.Β 

JP

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Pratibha Savani

Aww thank you John. Yes I think dreams are quite powerful and give comfort. I actually had the dream about 7 hours before she passed away. Was quite strange cos to me I think she was saying goodbye to me and I remember the dream so clearly and wrote it as above.Β 
Thank you kindly for reading it and for your lovely comment. πŸ™πŸ½πŸ’œπŸ’œπŸ’œ

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