Poem -
As She Looks At Me
Her longing is apparent with a wink and a smile
Deep blue are her eyes with that hypnotic alure
Lavender engulfs her milky white body with wondrous delight
My mind is locked in tight to touch her tonight
With each kiss I am driven to have her mind body and soul
I am captivated and mesmerized with her loving stare
Angelic is the nature of her ways
Our euphoric feelings are here to stay
Being with her to capture her love's return
With each passing day we are together time flies by so fast
Longing , waiting to never have to leave home at last
With all of my love I give to you with our hearts beating together for all eternity
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Such a romantic piece showing the increasing confidence you have when confronted by a blank page. You are putting so much into your writing !!!
Keep them coming ! Thoroughly enjoying your works !
All the best to you as always ! :)
Hey Richard. Thanks for your sweet comments. I am trying very hard to keep pushing my self to get better with my writing everyday. Your comments inspire me along with everyone on cosmo. Cheers hrl
Everyone on Cosmo inspires me to try to improve and develop my poetry !
Best wishes.
Hey Richard I agree everyone on Cosmo inspires me too. :)
An amazing community to be part of !
:)
I see how passionate you are woth these romantic writes because you get better with everyone. Allstars.
"Her longing is apparent with a wink and a smile
Deep blue are her eyes with that hypnotic alure
Lavender engulfs her milky white body with wondrous delight"
These lines are awesome had me hooked to read from the start.
Hey Devon thanks for your comments bro. I loved those lines they are my favorites too. Glad to see you on my page . Your comments inspire me to get better with each write. Hrl