SHE LOVES ME! HE LOVES ME NOT!

Iām so in love with her.
I wish had someone to love me.
When I meet her on the street, she looks through me, like nobodyās there.
I wish I could meet somebody that cared.
Sheās so beautiful.
Iām nothing but a wall flower.Ā
A guy like me would never have a chance.
My biological clock is about ready to stop.Ā I shouldāve tried to hook-up with a guy when I had the chance.
I know what Iāll do, Iāll buy her flowers.
What lovely apricot roses, but who is this āanonymous?'
Iāll send her candy.
Mr. Anonymous sent me a box of splendid chocolates.Ā Should I be flattered, or should I be scared?
Iām her secret admirer.
Iāve got a stalker.Ā
I need to get up the nerve to knock on her door and introduce myself.
Dad called and wants me to come over right now, he says he has something for me. He's concerned about this guy shadowing me.
I rang her bell, then I knocked on the door.Ā āDarn,ā sheās not home.Ā Wait a minute!Ā She didnāt completely shut the door.Ā When I knocked, it swung open.
Dad gave me a little hand gun.
I wonder where she put those flowers I sent her?Ā Do I dare take a peek around?
Theyāre not on the table, maybe she put them on her bedroom dresser.
Damn! I was in such a hurry to leave, I must have forgot to lock the door.
Oh my God sheās home!Ā Iāve got to hide!
I need to get to bed.
I'll hide under the bed.
I canāt believe what a mean looking thing this little gun is.
I canāt believe sheās lying right above me.Ā Sheās so close I can smell her sweet perfume.
āDear God.ā
Sheās praying.
āI know this sounds foolish, but I ask for but one thing.Ā I ask for you to send someone to love me.Ā Ā A man to be my lover, and hopefully, the father of my children.ā
āYour prayer has been answered!ā
āWhat The Fuck! Who the Hell is that?āĀ
āIām the guy God sent you.Ā Iām underneath your bed.ā
(I'm trying out a new poetry form; dialogue free verse.Ā I've got another I'll post later this week.Ā Tell me what you think, and if you ever seen this sort of poetry before.)
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Okay Kimmy. it's official you're my favorite poet to read right now, this is so creative and interesting man, pure 'edutaiment'...yes it def. works what you did; showing different thought streams in one poem; I tried doing that the other day, but no bsĀ this one is on a much higher level, yourĀ range in subject matter andĀ the scope of your imagination (I'm assuming) is extraordinary...standing o, Kimmy...stay fresh and interesting brother...I really look forward to reading more ofĀ your great posts...cheersĀ Ā Ā
Oh thank you Chris, I'm flattered.
Haha!! Oh my!! This is unbelievable!! I absolutely love this creative style of writing...extremely clever!! The picture is so creepy looking. Honestly one of the best poems I have read!! This part had me laughing:
Lots of love!!
Val ā„
Thank you so much Valerie.Ā Coming from Cosmo funnel's ambassador of February, I'm very flattered.
Lol! Kimmy this had me cracking up at th end, what an original idea two different point of views in a poem good write awesome job!
Thank you Devon, I'm trying a new kind of poetry I call dialogue free verse.Ā I've had a few misses, but this one seems to get folks attention.Ā Thanks.
nice.......now that is duality.........well done..........
Thank you Devon, I'm trying a new kind of poetry I call dialogue free verse.Ā I've had a few misses, but this one seems to get folks attention.Ā Thanks.
That's what I'm trying to capture in dialogue free verse.Ā How people with different life experiences see an issue or event, from different perspectives.
Hopefully, it will cause people to appreciate why we don't all think alike.
HEY KIMMY THAT 1 GOT MY ATTENTION & MY VOTE ! I LOVE YOUR STYLE & YOUR WAY OF THINKING & WRITING WELL DONE MATE X THANKS FOR SHARING