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SHE LOVES ME! HE LOVES ME NOT!

SHE LOVES ME!  HE LOVES ME NOT!

I’m so in love with her.
I wish had someone to love me.
When I meet her on the street, she looks through me, like nobody’s there.
I wish I could meet somebody that cared.
She’s so beautiful.
I’m nothing but a wall flower.Ā 
A guy like me would never have a chance.
My biological clock is about ready to stop.Ā  I should’ve tried to hook-up with a guy when I had the chance.
I know what I’ll do, I’ll buy her flowers.
What lovely apricot roses, but who is this ā€˜anonymous?'
I’ll send her candy.
Mr. Anonymous sent me a box of splendid chocolates.Ā  Should I be flattered, or should I be scared?
I’m her secret admirer.
I’ve got a stalker.Ā 
I need to get up the nerve to knock on her door and introduce myself.
Dad called and wants me to come over right now, he says he has something for me. He's concerned about this guy shadowing me.
I rang her bell, then I knocked on the door.Ā  ā€œDarn,ā€ she’s not home.Ā  Wait a minute!Ā  She didn’t completely shut the door.Ā  When I knocked, it swung open.
Dad gave me a little hand gun.
I wonder where she put those flowers I sent her?Ā  Do I dare take a peek around?
They’re not on the table, maybe she put them on her bedroom dresser.
Damn! I was in such a hurry to leave, I must have forgot to lock the door.
Oh my God she’s home!Ā  I’ve got to hide!
I need to get to bed.
I'll hide under the bed.
I can’t believe what a mean looking thing this little gun is.
I can’t believe she’s lying right above me.Ā  She’s so close I can smell her sweet perfume.
ā€œDear God.ā€
She’s praying.
ā€œI know this sounds foolish, but I ask for but one thing.Ā  I ask for you to send someone to love me.Ā Ā  A man to be my lover, and hopefully, the father of my children.ā€
ā€œYour prayer has been answered!ā€
ā€œWhat The Fuck! Who the Hell is that?ā€Ā 
ā€œI’m the guy God sent you.Ā  I’m underneath your bed.ā€

(I'm trying out a new poetry form; dialogue free verse.Ā  I've got another I'll post later this week.Ā  Tell me what you think, and if you ever seen this sort of poetry before.)

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Christopher Correia

Okay Kimmy. it's official you're my favorite poet to read right now, this is so creative and interesting man, pure 'edutaiment'...yes it def. works what you did; showing different thought streams in one poem; I tried doing that the other day, but no bsĀ this one is on a much higher level, yourĀ range in subject matter andĀ the scope of your imagination (I'm assuming) is extraordinary...standing o, Kimmy...stay fresh and interesting brother...I really look forward to reading more ofĀ your great posts...cheersĀ Ā Ā 

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Kimmy Alan

Oh thank you Chris, I'm flattered.

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Valerie Lynn

Haha!! Oh my!! This is unbelievable!! I absolutely love this creative style of writing...extremely clever!! The picture is so creepy looking. Honestly one of the best poems I have read!! This part had me laughing:

~~I’m her secret admirer.
I’ve got a stalker.

Lots of love!!

Val ♄

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Kimmy Alan

Thank you so much Valerie.Ā  Coming from Cosmo funnel's ambassador of February, I'm very flattered.

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Devon La Porte

Lol! Kimmy this had me cracking up at th end, what an original idea two different point of views in a poem good write awesome job!

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Kimmy Alan

Thank you Devon, I'm trying a new kind of poetry I call dialogue free verse.Ā  I've had a few misses, but this one seems to get folks attention.Ā  Thanks.

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Jamie Tegtmeyer

nice.......now that is duality.........well done..........

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Kimmy Alan

Thank you Devon, I'm trying a new kind of poetry I call dialogue free verse.Ā  I've had a few misses, but this one seems to get folks attention.Ā  Thanks.

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Kimmy Alan

That's what I'm trying to capture in dialogue free verse.Ā How people with different life experiences see an issue or event, from different perspectives.

Hopefully, it will cause people to appreciate why we don't all think alike.

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Tracy Timothy

HEY KIMMY THAT 1 GOT MY ATTENTION & MY VOTE ! I LOVE YOUR STYLE & YOUR WAY OF THINKING & WRITING WELL DONE MATE X THANKS FOR SHARING

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