Poem -
The Shell That Holds You
I'm good at many things but I don't stand out
I plant my feet but I don't stand my ground
I open my mouth but I'm too scared to speak
I spread my wings but am afraid to leap
I am the shell of every human being
I bring depression that scolds you
anger that loathes you
and fear that holds you
I am the shell that molds you
when you're too scared to escape you live here with me
too afraid to live life
you're no longer living
you're waiting for death
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Comments
This one is very sad you make others feel the hoplessness
I apologize that really wasn't my intention.
Come out of that shell, Be brace, With all support for a happy life, Regards & Love WILLIAMSJI
I apologize, that was not my intentions.
I wrote this not to make people feel bad, whether motivate them to want to break out of their shells
It's a good piece - depression can cause so many fears and writing releases some ... Â Tina x
sad but good write congrats x
a powerful portrayal of an honest perspective!
you've propelled a bit of yourself through the shell Dana! i trust its alleviating in a sense!
~~too afraid to live life
 you're no longer living
 you're waiting for death
this is intense! keep writing, expressing thoughts and emotions!
thanks for sharing and i wish you the best!
Very intense but excellent write Dana.Keep growing.
thank you so much!! I can't tell you how happy all this feed back makes me
Dammit Dana, enjoyed this write, can't wait to read more of your works:) xoxo