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Short 'n Sweet (3)

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lodigiana
Short 'n Sweet (3)

Pass the cookies and the cake,
the onlyΒ  passions in my life.
I’m the soft and creamy centre
youΒ  just Β cut through with a knife
Β 
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Comedy Tragedy
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Tragicomedy Verse
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Christopher Correia

the rhyming scheme is pleasant and very clever, liking these a lot poetess, different but not abstract the points hitting home, very refreshing reading, enjoyed

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lodigiana

It made a nice change to try to concentrate my thoughts and get Β a thread of a story running in just a few words..glad you enjoyed it thanks so much for your really constructive comments which I really value! xx
Lodigiana

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