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Shower

Shower

With each and every rain drop a story to be told 
Beaty despair an ever lasting cycle 

Water rushing down my face I feel it like tears of the earth 
is this the true nature of the showers 

The true purpose of the showers 
to try and show us the pain we are causing to the world 

suffocating
unable to breath

 And yet we still ignore the signs 

we can make a change

but will you 

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Uma Owen

Last two stanzas are near perfect.

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Reece Mack

What would need changing from your prospective to make them perfect 

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Uma Owen

I would maybe make suffocating it’s own line and change “yet we still ignore” to “and yet we still ignore”. Makes it a bit more desperate in my eyes.

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