Poem -
SHOWER ME WITH KISSES
Shower me with kisses
caress my body too
Take me to another place
that only you can do
I will lay here with a yearning
for your every touch
I will take your passion as a
sign, of loving me so much
Never did i think i would succumb
again to this, utter pleasure
And never did i think i`d find
a man like you again, to treasure
The desire i see in your eyes
shows me this love is real
So i`ll return the shower of kisses
then our love, we both can feel
Take all of me and i will of you
until our bodies are spent
And we will lie, in each others arms
for together, we know we are meant
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Hi Cherie ... I thought i would give this type of write a shot
No where near your amazing works of passion but i`m trying lol
glad you liked it... love and hugs Debs xox
Good write, thanks for sharing, my applause
Regards
Hi Nimmy ... Thank you very much for your kind words
Warm regards Debs
Hello Deborah. For your first attempt at a romantic passionate write I think you did a wonderful job. The flow and rhyme worked really well and the feeling of passion seared into my mind. Do me a favor, please continue your exploration in these writes and I promise you, you will get better and better. Peace.
Hi Devon.... Thank you for your great comments much appreciated.
I will take your advice a try and write some more on this topic
and hopefully i will get better and better :-)
best wishes Debs
The intimate connection of lovers expressed perfectly !
Great write.
Warmest wishes ! :)
Hi Richard .....Glad you liked this one
Thank you for your comments
Best wishes Debs
Oooh er missus!!....WOW Debs!!!!......Ya cookin on gas gerl!!...( As they say in Liverpool! )
Well done my darling that was superb and I loved every line. I can`t believe that was your first time!!....said the actress to the Bishop!!!!!
I love ya kiddo
G xx
Ha ha Hi Georgina yes my first ,so glad you
liked it , ALL from memory of course considering
i have been single for years lol
love and hugs Debs xx
Think positive gel! ya aint got a Horrid Henry naggin at ya...and no one will be knickin ya chockies out the fridge!! need I go on?!!
Love G xx
PHEWWWWWW! Hot, hot, hot! In fact sizzling! What are you doing tonight? YUM! Love and huggs, Jack xxx
Hi Jack Ha ha A little different for me this one
but glad you liked it love n hugs Debs xx :-)
Hi Debs,
As the old song goes, "Love is lovelier the second time around". A very steamy poem. Well written, with a happy theme. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Hugs, Love and Peace,
xox Larry
Hi Larry ... lovely words from you as always a different write for me
Thank you for your support of this one love and hugs Debs xox