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shower power

shower power

hard ,fast spray's the water
our body's naked 
drenched with passion and wanting
your hand's feeling every inch
slide them inside my thigh's
caress my wild flower
slow and manly squeeze's
your tongue like a snake making
it's way slowly to the entrance
of my paradise
up against each other gripping
tight ,faster with ecstasy
cries of exhilarating lust
flesh making contact like never before
steam rise's ,love juice flow's
shaking with release,the cool water
wash's it away
kiss me tender ,look into my eye's
hold me close
shower has the power

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Fatima Ahmed

Love this poem, great job.. gives me an intense feeling as if I was in the moment.

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Tina Moore

thank you fatima  im glad you enjoyed    tina x

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Tina Moore

lol  thanx chris  loved writing it  in the ....  sitting room  lol    your friend   tina x

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Susan O'Reilly

hi tina now i cant even have that cold shower great write congrats x

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Tina Moore

lol  thanx susan im glad you enjoyed it    lol      tina x

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Tina Moore

thanx williamsJl   for reading  all the best  tina x

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Lee-anne Margro

a steamy shower hour we all dream to have - I could almost feel the water drip

Well written tina - thanks

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Tina Moore

lol thanks lee-anne  for reading it   best wishes     tina x

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James Whaley

Dear Tina,

    Maybe it's just me- but a poet's power should be measured by his/her ability involve the reader's senses- sight, sound, touch and (taste?). Your power would measure beyond the scale. Excellent piece!

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Tina Moore

thanks james   for a great insight and comment  tina x

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Tina Moore

james your comment  touched me  how much you read into my poems senses  you need to feel the sense of being there  when you write about the person you love  and funnel it lol    best wishes  tina  

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Tina Moore

thank you wiliamsJl  another good insight  love is an experience  between  two people who can go that extra mile with each other    tina x

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Stephen Weyant

oh yeah!

this is passion, sensual!

I enjoyed this tina!

thanks again

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Tina Moore

haha!!    good job well done then stephen  thanx   tina x

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