shower power

hard ,fast spray's the water
our body's naked
drenched with passion and wanting
your hand's feeling every inch
slide them inside my thigh's
caress my wild flower
slow and manly squeeze's
your tongue like a snake making
it's way slowly to the entrance
of my paradise
up against each other gripping
tight ,faster with ecstasy
cries of exhilarating lust
flesh making contact like never before
steam rise's ,love juice flow's
shaking with release,the cool water
wash's it away
kiss me tender ,look into my eye's
hold me close
shower has the power

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Comments
Love this poem, great job.. gives me an intense feeling as if I was in the moment.
thank you fatima im glad you enjoyed tina x
lol thanx chris loved writing it in the .... sitting room lol your friend tina x
hi tina now i cant even have that cold shower great write congrats x
lol thanx susan im glad you enjoyed it lol tina x
thanx williamsJl for reading all the best tina x
a steamy shower hour we all dream to have - I could almost feel the water drip
Well written tina - thanks
lol thanks lee-anne for reading it best wishes tina x
Dear Tina,
Maybe it's just me- but a poet's power should be measured by his/her ability involve the reader's senses- sight, sound, touch and (taste?). Your power would measure beyond the scale. Excellent piece!
thanks james for a great insight and comment tina x
james your comment touched me how much you read into my poems senses you need to feel the sense of being there when you write about the person you love and funnel it lol best wishes tina
thank you wiliamsJl another good insight love is an experience between two people who can go that extra mile with each other tina x
oh yeah!
this is passion, sensual!
I enjoyed this tina!
thanks again
haha!! good job well done then stephen thanx tina x