Shy
Shy
Until the very first time
when
she let him see her
naked
She would hide her
perfect form in shadows
deep ..
Yes indeed, until that
first time
She always tended to
recline
somewhere much more
covertly
between the sunscreen
and the
privacy her parasol
demanded ..
Halfway between those
high hills
some called mountains
and the shallow
lace edged coves of Crete
But as her
holiday progressed
She just could not bear
to save those
hidden depths of hers
another week ..
And so it was decided
after one half pint
of local raki, on day nine
or thereabouts ..
She finally relented and
let him feel
her naked for the first
time with
curtains drawn and all
the lights off ..
Still out of sight somewhere
beneath those
freshly laundered hotel sheets
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Hello Neville, aah the sweet surrender to temptation, that even shyness cannot keep contained. Although I myself have never done the holiday romance. You capture it well here my friend. As ever you paint the scene and sensations beautifully, and with a touch of class 👌
Gwen x
some things just aint meant to be and some have simply got to change ..
so drop us a line if you fancy a short break ................... in the meantime though, I seriously thank you Gwen .. stay well my friend and I hope to hear from you again soonly ........................ Neville x
Wonderfully descriptive Neville, you really take the reader into the scene x
when ya scene it all, there's nowt else to do but write about it is there ... no names tho ' .................. or only very rarely ♡ x
You!! my friend....are a poetic novelist!!.......excellent poetic prose!!.......ALL STARS!!......smokin' grooves brother!!......smokin' grooves!!......T xo : )
What a lovely thing to suggest kind sir .. I really am most grateful to you Tony
many thanks indeed ........................ All Good Things to You and Yours ...
Your exceptionally grateful friend ............................................ Neville :)
Glad I found this! Great poem. I feel that there is A LOT going on here between the ... er......lines ( what did you think I was going to say?) Great poem x
I dunno, but I am seriously glad you stopped by ........ thank you Tina .. x
Took me back in time to when I met my first love 😊I’m still with him so brought back good day vibes 😊👌🏼
Thank you so much for visiting these words of mine Deb, it makes it all worthwhile ... Neville :)
Great poem.
Many massive THANK YOU's Randy :)
Hi Neville,
Great poem 👌🏾 👏🏾.
Have a positive and creative day.
Georgia ✌🏿 😁
How very kind. Bless you Georgia, many huge thank you's are on their way :)
Awesome poem
Cheers Greg .. I don't know why but I am not always getting notified when someone visits my words and kindly leaves an impression or thought behind .. So if I am ever late in getting back to you, please rest assured, I most surely will when I eventually find ya .. All Good Things sir :)
Neville
how fun to read! reflect. well done.
Thank you kindly, truly and most sincerely tooly .. Neville :)