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Shy

Shy

Until the very first time
when
she let him see her
naked
She would hide her
perfect form in shadows
deep ..
Yes indeed, until that
first time
She always tended to
recline
somewhere much more
covertly
between the sunscreen
and the
privacy her parasol
demanded ..
Halfway between those
high hills
some called mountains
and the shallow
lace edged coves of Crete
But as her
holiday progressed
She just could not bear
to save those
hidden depths of hers
another week ..
And so it was decided
after one half pint
of local raki, on day nine
or thereabouts ..
She finally relented and
let him feel
her naked for the first
time with
curtains drawn and all
the lights off ..
Still out of sight somewhere
beneath those
freshly laundered hotel sheets

 

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Gwendoline

Hello Neville, aah the sweet surrender to temptation, that even shyness cannot keep contained. Although I myself have never done the holiday romance. You capture it well here my friend. As ever you paint the scene and sensations beautifully, and with a touch of class 👌 
Gwen x

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Neville

some things just aint meant to be and some have simply got to change ..
so drop us a line if you fancy a short break ................... in the meantime though, I seriously thank you Gwen .. stay well my friend and I hope to hear from you again soonly ........................ Neville x

 

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Marion

Wonderfully descriptive Neville, you really take the reader into the scene x

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Neville

when ya scene it all, there's nowt else to do but write about it is there ... no names tho ' .................. or only very rarely ♡ x

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Tony Taylor

You!! my friend....are a poetic novelist!!.......excellent poetic prose!!.......ALL STARS!!......smokin' grooves brother!!......smokin' grooves!!......T xo  : )

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Neville

What a lovely thing to suggest kind sir .. I really am most grateful to you Tony 
many thanks indeed ........................ All Good Things to You and Yours ...

Your exceptionally grateful friend ............................................  Neville :)

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Being Me

Glad I found this! Great poem. I feel that there is A LOT going on here between the ... er......lines ( what did you think I was going to say?) Great poem x

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Neville

I dunno, but I am seriously glad you stopped by ........ thank you Tina .. x

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Deb

Took me back in time to when I met my first love 😊I’m still with him so brought back good day vibes 😊👌🏼

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Neville

Thank you so much for visiting these words of mine Deb, it makes it all worthwhile ... Neville :) 

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Neville

Many massive THANK YOU's Randy :)

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Georgia Elliott

Hi Neville,

Great poem 👌🏾 👏🏾. 

Have a positive and creative day.

Georgia ✌🏿 😁 

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Neville

How very kind. Bless you Georgia, many huge thank you's are on their way :)

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Neville

Cheers Greg .. I don't know why but I am not always getting notified when someone visits my words and kindly leaves an impression or thought behind .. So if I am ever late in getting back to you, please rest assured, I most surely will when I eventually find ya .. All Good Things sir :)

Neville 

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Neville

Thank you kindly, truly and most sincerely tooly ..  Neville :)

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