Poem -

Silent until the wind blows

Silent until the wind blows

I have a spot I like to go when I'm happy,angry or even low . The peacefulness is more then enough, Like when my days are hard or rough.  NOBODY talks I hope someone listens,of course your there,, But something is missing... Its your eyes that look at me with sincerity,and your smile that makes me smile, it's your hugs that make all bad seem to fade.I know u hear me vent,and listen when I cry,you never interrupted me or asked me 'why'?... The wind begins to blow and I hear the wind chimes I hung from the tree,that's. When I know u are listening to me. The chimes are low and sound so quaint. Now I know u really a saint, more then that your my voice in my head,I just hate ur buried underground in your bed. Rest easy and hear the chimes,I still pick up every dime. Your flowers never wilt I get u fresh flowers like the ones in your garden u built. You were ther when I took my first breath, and I was there when u took your last, I TREASURE all our memories from my past. I miss u gaga keep watching over me,I won't let u down,I come to see you to smile never to frown. RIP TO MY GRANDMOTHER 

Log in or Become a Member to comment.

Comments

author
Tony Taylor

Absolutely gorgeous poetic remembrance and an uplifting piece of poetic prose...... truly compelling phrasing that has some VERY original lines running throughout ~

               ~ "Now I know you're really a saint,
                   more than that, you're the voice in my head..."

That is just such a beautiful sentiment... and coupled with the imagery you've crafted here I think your 'gaga'? when be very proud.......ALL STARS!!...... well done dear poet sister ....and......WELCOME to COSMO KRYSTAL!!....LOVE & ROCKETS!!......T xo 🐧❤
Ps......I guess I'm welcoming you for the second time now... smiles 😊

 

Reply
author
Krystal Harper0

Dannnng Tony this means SO SO much to me!!! My "gaga" was my BESTFRIEND  the kind of person u never forget,has that contagious personality, all my poems are sentimental to me, but the ones about her mean the most. Thank you so much for your kind words I'm so GRATEFUL!!!!!!!

Reply