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Silk coffin

The Silk Coffin's by

What do I value? 
is it the witty conversation you deliver?
Is it the detached way you smoke your camel ?
Perhaps it is the way you formed a narcissistic cocoon around me
Even a silk coffin is still death
I abandoned who I am and what I was for you
That was all my delusion and sickness
I see how you fed my need to be. Damaged
How I happily opened the gates of hell for you
In retrospect I think a funeral would have been more to the point  than a reception
Hey, 
Have you finally found another 
Broke down kiddy ride
Halelujah, 
i have been set free!
 

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Marion

Yep...you just described my not happily married experience for me...lol. Nice write x

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Susanna Hill

Ouch! I am so sorry you had to experience anything like this relationship ordeal. I recognize that I attracted  him to me.  My signal of "I live to fix people and become a victim ".  I also say wow,
you freaking weirdo get the f___ away from  me.,,...,. I just couldn't believe someone could be that twisted.
Susanna

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Jim "The Lad" ....

my daughter dealing with two of that kind as an ex and a baby daddy whom just abducted their little boy!!!!!  my grand son! thank for shining a light on self absorbed jerks!! they are prevalent in our broken society! with out structure,morals , Fathers in the home and a higher power we are in a sad state as a society! nice poem!......................................Jim

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Susanna Hill

Oh boy you ain't kidding.  There are some real monsters out there.  Charming narcissists that prey on their unknowing loving victims.  It is  mainly a huge lack of role models and teaching basic respect and concern for others. Love your comment
Susanna

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linda lank

your words get right to the point cool Linda keep writing bravo

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Susanna Hill

Thank you very much for your taking the time to read and comment
susanna

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