Poem -
Sin Bin
The God we did invent
to track this sin concept
has become quite antiquated
and thoroughly irrelevant
in this age of mass discontent
The chains of behavior control
have been loosened permanently
All that remains
is the residue of guilt
from a bygone age
when peeps still gave a damn
about consequence
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Interesting and very deep! In a lot of respects religion seems to thrive on guilt x
Thanks for the kind words... As one raised in the Catholic faith, I have a special acquaintence with the tyranny of guilt ;)
I like this poem a lot. It resonates with me but is so simple. Keep in there. The Fish of the Sea.
I am glad you liked it.... I have a tendency to ramble in my writing, so brevity of words is always a challenge for me
Good morning! I pray that some day realization will come that it's Satan causing guilt and discord. May you find peace... Thanks for sharing your feelings.