Sing
Song lyrics (written 2017)
Thoughts of you run through my headĀ
Sugar coated memories of a life when we met
Now I have you locked in my heartĀ
I can feelĀ you thereĀ
When I look at the stars aboveĀ
And Iām racing through spaceĀ and time
Lifeās ups and downs defineĀ
All that I must become for youĀ
So...
Chorus
Sing out my loveĀ
Life holds more meaningĀ
Once you lose one you loveĀ
(x2)
I was chasing rainbowsĀ
When suddenly the sun chose to dieĀ
And I couldnāt bring the light back - no matterĀ
No matter how hard I triedĀ
Then I felt myself fallingĀ
And suddenly I hit the groundĀ
The world around me shatteredĀ
And I couldnāt - I couldnāt make a soundĀ
Pre-chorus
But you were there to hold me in my dreamsĀ
Saying ābabe, just hold on tight, itās gonna be alright youāll seeāĀ
Chorus
Sing out my loveĀ
Life holds more meaningĀ
Once you lose one you love
(x2)
(Instrumental)
Bridge
I wonāt give up onĀ this worldĀ
I know that you want me to climb on high -
Keep marching onĀ
Show me a sign in the darkĀ
Leave me a light onĀ
And walk by my sideĀ
I will fly
I willĀ
Chorus
Sing out my loveĀ
Life holds more meaningĀ
Once you lose one you love
(x2)
I will sing....
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Wow!Ā A songwriter too!Ā This has to be one of the best song lyrics I have read here on Cosmo. Great work Gwendoline. Do you have the music for it too? Brilliant work āx
Hello Being Me (am blushing now) yes I have been writing songs for a long time. I have many recorded, I have just never shared them. I am not very confidentĀ
Really pleased you liked it, the song means a lot to me šxĀ
You should get your songs "out there" ... trust me, you have no need for a lack of confidence. I have read your words and they shine š x
You have made my day Being Me š thank you for believing in me. More than I believe in myself xĀ
Awww...we all need someone to believe in us āx
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Can't hear the music but the lyrics are beautiful. The type of lyrics I'm trying to write for myself Gwen...and failing. I am borrowing yours for strength š
Marion, you may borrow as much as you want, and as often as you need ššš
Awww how lovely & very clever you got me singing my heart out ā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļø
ā¤ļøā¤ļøā¤ļø I bet you sing beautifully Jill xxĀ
Awww noo I donāt can hold a tune but Iām crap lol so much so i have made up 50 songs n I kuvem but my hubby refuses to listen to any he will listen to me reading my poems tho haha I send songs to few friends i try ky best to singem lol Marion n Greg has heard me š¤£š¤£š¤£ā¤ļøšā¤ļø
Oh wow Jill am excited š you write songs too š Ā I would love to see one xxĀ
They all on cosmo as poems ā¤ļøšā¤ļø
Ooh you clever minx, hiding your music prowess through your poetry šā¤ļø
WOW WOW WOW!!!!!!
what great song wowĀ
i loved i hope you haveĀ
put it to music
Thank you Greg, yes I have this recorded to music. Am just to scared to share lolĀ
so glad you liked it. Thank you ever so much for your support š
Holy crap! That was amazing. Turely, it takes talented to really showcase your lyrics without audio. I feel as If i knew the song before I have even heard it. And to think I couldĀ go have a crack at song writing! This blew me out of the water!!
Hello Max :) Thatās just made my day, week, month! I canāt thank you enough for such a wonderful reaction to my song š And yes have a go at song writing. I find it very therapeutic. I would love to see what comes out of your ocean ;)Ā
Thank you for your kindness and encouragement š»
Blimey! You can write songs as well!!
Is there no end to your talents.
Eat you heart out Annie Lennox, Adele and move over!
Gwendoline you haven't put a foot wrong by the looks of it and respect to you.
Full honours and a great treasure to read and to tap poetry fingers to.Ā šā¤ļø
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Shaun youāre putting a big bright smile on my face š Iām super happy you liked my song. I was worried it might get lost not being to music. So pleased people have liked it. You are always so kind to give me such wonderful feedback. Thank you my lovely poetic friend ā¤ļøš
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Omg Gwen this is bloody awesome! The lyrics sing to me already! I would love to hear the tune! You are a brill writer from what little I've read of yours and song writing took it to another level! Please share the song you have nothing to fear! You are a true artist in the making! Do you sing too?? Just amazing!! Pxššš
Gosh I keep blushing, I am so made up with the response to my song. I have been writing songs since my teens. My dad taught me to play guitar and we would write songs together. I have many recorded. I just tend to keep music as a therapy for myself. Never thought it would be good enough for anything other than that. Really made up you liked it. Maybe one day I will gain some courage to share the tune. I really donāt have confidence at all
Thanks so much for your words of encouragement and support ššš»
What a gorgeous song you have here. I often describe writing as music in my head and would love to hear my own to music but I'm not that creative lol. Would love to hear the audio version to this. Don't be embarrassed or shy to share š there is no judgment here. You are free to be yourself
Thank you Shelley š I need to gain some courage. Am a bit like that cowardly lion š¦ But hearing how supportive you all are is lovely. I bet your writing would be beautiful to music. You are so right, when I write poetry I always feel a rhythm and I read it out loud so I can feel where the breaths and beat goĀ
loved that you liked this, the song means a lot to me xx šš»
WOW!! G!!......this is excellent work here.....there's not much more I can add to the comments above.......but I will say this.....one of the VERY BEST comments a songwriter can get is what MAX left you ~ when he said he felt he knew the song before he even heard it (the music).....That is what great songwriters strive to accomplish......that feeling that you've heard it before or that if you hadn't that someone SHOULD have written before!!....that means the listener will remember it immediately and begin humming it to themselves, in the shower, on the bus. etc. ~ a definite sign of a great song.....your talent is undeniable girlfriend......PINNED for perfection......I Love that you added in a "pre-chorus" too!!......Killer write!!.....or ......Smokin' grooves Gwen!! .....Smokin' Grooves!!......smiles....TonyĀ xoĀ : )
Thank you T for checking out my song :) I think I speak for all when I say your feedback is always considered gold dust on here. So am pleased as punch you liked it enough to pin :) Many many thanks for the kind words. Yes Max made my day with his fab reaction :)Ā
Thanks for always being so supportive my fab friend xoĀ