Sins of the Father
Its so easy to forget everything, My words could never explain
The trauma, the dysfunction, the sickness in your brain
I'm always struggling, To see a brighter light
There is no consolation, To make the ruin right.
The memories are haunting, as I relive the pain
Every tear shed, I try to refrain
the manipulation, the horror
the selfish mental gain
Did it make you make you feel more? Draining our sanity?
With your backstabbing lies and act of inhumanity.
Walking around like some twisted piece of vanity.
A pathetic egomaniac, Youre nothing that you seem
You are the king in your world, always building your esteem.
If I had the ability, I would yell, I would scream.
But you've taken away my voice,
You put me to shame.
I never had another choice.
Piteous, ignorant, your the one whose blind.
I wont live your life, repetitive and confined.
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Good write, Thanks for sharing, Regards WILLIAMSJI
Thank you very much for your feedback!
Victoria I love the way you write, it's a joy to read. You know exactly what you are doing, and your choice of vocabulary and your lines of imagery are perfect. There is great flow to your writing and a rhythmic feel where at times I feel I could almost rap your work (if that's the terminology). Trust me I wouldn't even attempt to do that out loud ha ha!!! You are a talented young lady and I watch your work with great interest A big fan. A vote and nom from me:)
Thank you for reading! I love to hear these things. Ive been writing since I was 12 years old. My mother was my inspiration. She taught me that words can be healing and they can portray beautiful things. As time went on I found that she was right. I write when I feel strong emotions of sadness, anger, even love. Its a way for me to accept the feelings I have. Its very relieving and I first used it as a way to help myself. Then as I showed a few select friends, they told me that my poetry could help other people too. That if they found someone who related to their conflicts and the way they felt, maybe they would be inspired to come out and do the same. To try and give others hope. haha thats how I feel wwhen I read it sometimes! I try to keep my meter as even as I can. Thank you so much. Your words keep me going and hopeful that others appreciate my writing just as much as you and I! Thanks for the awesome feedback! :) <3
Congrats on your winning nomination, Also, the below lines are really good. Congrats
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
I can feel the rage
True emotion comes from expirence and it comes from the heart. Thank you for reading and thank you for your feedback. <3 :)
great write congrats x
Thank you so much and thanks for your feedback!
I love it. Its like you can feel the emotions
thank you. its what i aim for
Quite a moving piece. I am researching for a book on the sins of fathers and mothers.
thank you so much for your feedback